Whispers of a Raven - The Choices I make
Added 2021-06-24 14:30:17 +0000 UTCThis is where the story takes quite the turn...
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Harry will now become the avenger of death(the Baba Yeager if you will for all deatheaters and voldemort himself. Death will sort this out for Harry and what I think will happen to Malfoy in Harry's original timeline will not be pleasant!
Steve Mccormick
2021-07-25 17:53:34 +0000 UTCI hated this chapter. The rest of the story has been brilliant, but this was not to my taste. The idea of your wife merging together with someone who has been Lucius Malfoy’s wife is.... not for me. You should have had Narcissa become a ghost traveling through Magical Britain, and see how it had become, learning about Harry at the same time. Not merge it with the soul of another. The very idea that they are two different souls, indicate that they are different. Meaning that the girl Harry married will no longer be the same, as we have already seen what happens when souls merge in Harry. Not for me at all. I hope Harry will just extract Narcissa’s soul, instead of the merged one.
Pgx27
2021-07-12 19:40:49 +0000 UTC
