A Flower for the Soul - Duelling
Added 2020-12-08 20:08:50 +0000 UTCBeginning of the duelling contest... up next is the Yule Ball
Comments
Those duels were amazingly descripted. Can't wait for the next chapter. My only hope is Voldemort's agent is someone unexpected rather than Moody, just to see this story move so far from canon, it can't even see it in the distance with binoculars.
Dray Houston
2020-12-11 22:53:29 +0000 UTCAwesome duels, I like your descriptions very much!
Victory For The People
2020-12-08 21:02:00 +0000 UTCLoved the new chapter. It will be interesting to see how Fleur digs herself out of that hole.
W A Black
2020-12-08 20:55:17 +0000 UTCIt’s nice that Tom isn’t helping Harry with every little thing, like the egg, and teaching him to learn for himself. As always, love your version of writing magical fights/duels. Nice chapter.
Brenden Cowell
2020-12-08 20:35:34 +0000 UTCExcellent as per usual. I would try to refrain from using so much caps in the future though. It's hard to read.
Patrick Perrault
2020-12-08 20:34:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always, you hit a great balance on the action on level of detail. It never drug on excessively while still being detailed enough to draw a great picture. I genuinely wish the magical fights in the movies had all been this good.
Erinnyes
2020-12-08 20:28:11 +0000 UTC
