A Flower for the Soul - Third Year
Added 2020-11-25 20:55:29 +0000 UTCFinal part of what I consider to be the prologue. The pace will slow considerably after this, beginning with fourth year. (No more single chapters per academic year)
Comments
First and foremost, love the concept. I've seen a great many "Harry gets Voldemorts memories" stories, but I can't think of a single one where he gets Voldemort as an ally in his head. The interplay is great, and you've handled their relationship (including the reveal of who Tom is) extremely well. Beyond that, the action is good, the spells are interesting, the character work is on point, and the whole thing is just a joy to read. Can't wait for more!
Erinnyes
2020-11-26 06:27:08 +0000 UTC
