Derideal 10-20
Added 2022-10-07 14:34:18 +0000 UTCthe original page I thought it was so bad... that I basically re-draw this entirely :c
and almost every page in this episode was so dark!
I also took the time to divide their environments by color, so the panels would be also easier to tell which side, Ivory is standing in a orange-lit hallway
Alpha's room is mostly dark and bluish with night light
Comments
Lies! They obviously wanted both to be together (?) π
AndrΓ©s Barra
2022-10-09 02:28:50 +0000 UTCBoth versions look good, and it's cool to see a bit of insight to that! Though, I gotta say, they didn't technically GIVE her a partner lol
Dakkota
2022-10-08 21:22:05 +0000 UTCI know right!
Memsys
2022-10-07 22:53:36 +0000 UTCKind of a fine line between edgy, apathetic, and brooding, huh?
Kit Foxboy
2022-10-07 19:39:37 +0000 UTCI love her infatuation and his uncertainty in the face of it. It would be a rush of possibility to meet another of your kind when you've been alone for so long.
Kit Foxboy
2022-10-07 19:38:39 +0000 UTCyeah, he feels more uninterested
AndrΓ©s Barra
2022-10-07 17:13:35 +0000 UTCalpha comes across as more edgy in the original x3
Memsys
2022-10-07 15:57:59 +0000 UTCyeah, that's the general idea heh, the old pages are so bad sometimes :c
AndrΓ©s Barra
2022-10-07 15:04:11 +0000 UTCI like the change to partner. And also the new updated page does look better. Keep it upπ
EunosMiata
2022-10-07 15:03:27 +0000 UTC
