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The Black Ship - Chapter 46 Part 6

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The Black Ship - Chapter 46 Part 6

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Wyatt has shown both sides now. I can imagine a scene where he runs into Gimor. tells him his name and simply says I live. then walks away as it slowly sinks into Gimors mind who he is.

newstart627

What are you thinking?? I hope it is good.

Scot

Either we missed Tuesday or time stop, this week is too long to wait to hear Wyatt’s new name in Noir Navio!

Adana

You can talk to us, a lot of us are in the same boat. 🙂

Jayne

After listening to this for 4th time, why do I think there’s more to the Prince than meets the eye???

Colin Sland

I’ve never been really sociable in my life, so I’ve never had a lot of friends. And the few friends I do have aren’t interested in things like this story. But I do wish I could find one person around me that liked this story as much as me so we can discuss it together. Not having someone to talk about it with sucks.

Darwin Johnson

I wonder if Wyatt share the training routines with his wing. Imagine the havoc that those 5 pilots could cause with the enemy after training.

Jeff Wright

Likely.

Jeff Wright

Wyatt will be promoted to commander since Redford has been promoted, he owns the Noir Navio, after all the prince tried to pilfer him from his sister. He'll now get a new armor, fighter, implants, and his command of The Black Ship lol

Ricky Lorenzo

Just subbed to support the author this story replaced SW as my fav space opera

Ricky Lorenzo

so far we have had two people call him two of the options little cayston said wraith and max said wolfhound

Hawks356

Listened to it thrice. I liked it. Still looking forward to state of the fleet. Wyatt’s true rewards and Clara’s Negos with the general

Jason Wilson

Come to think of it, learning that might do a lot for helping Casimir to truly move on, knowing that the Wraith he fears built himself up from an even lower low as a mere child, showing that he too can recover and become a better person.

dotnet

@ekhina I think what you wanted was “chain of command “ not “change of command”. Love this story. Love how you incorporated Wyatt’s nicknames into the story.

Tim Edwards

The first CHERUBIM! 4 faced angel of house Astor. lol

J.R. Turner

I feel like his latest outburst is going to mean that Wyatt's experiences have to be shared with at least the other head officers so they can understand where he's coming from. He's taking a bunch of names and is clearly exhibiting a trauma response, since they know what the Drazan do, it's easy to guess that Wyatt has lost people to them, but I doubt they'll guess that he was basically almost cattle. Loved the episode!

dotnet

Just Wyatt's presence terrified Casimir, but Maxamillian knew how to help him come to terms, even as Wyatt stipulated never to oppose him again. There is no greater teacher than experience of reality and Istanel just got schooled how different reality can be to just descriptive information.

T Griffetts

Leopold “Guess he didn’t need my help.”

Scot

Ekhidna is a master with imagery I can see this playing in my head as it goes

Jeremy Cable

yes! His squad mates!

Ryan

Known as "Wolfhound" to all, and "The Wraith of House Astor" to enemies, "Sir Wyatt" in formality, and simply Wyatt to friends. maybe "The Man of four faces" to those outside the principality?

Ryan

So intense

Vanguard

Can’t wait to see how everyone else reacts to Wyatt’s performance on the Gallant Venture!!

Colin Sland

Black Ship Tuesdays baby!! I woke up this morning and checked for the latest chapter with anticipation. Then proceeded to listen to the last 2 episodes for the 7th time!! When it finally came, I was screaming with excitement as I drove around in my car( everyone else probably thought I was crazy). Loving the Astor Wolfhound !!

Colin Sland

Yes, too quickly!

Colin Sland

I hope Wyatt and Jincho Don't get caught for modifying Ishtonel's armor. I they undo it before anything happens.

Carl Shultz

Hi John I was just wondering how you came up with that being what Wyatt and Jincho did to istanell's armor? I believe that's correct and I certainly didn't think of it when I read it and it certainly makes sense if that is truly correct what a good catch you made.

Carl Shultz

The Phantom Wolfhound?

Chip1217

Gotta love that Maniac!

Chip1217

Per

Deano

I personally love the hack that Wyatt and Jinco did to Istonel’s armor to let the smell in so he doesn’t admire the Drazzen and talk them up so much. What a stroke of genius.

John Myers

And despite it being almost 45 mins it was still over too quickly

David Orf

Wolfhound!

Cole Baldwin

Wyatt also destroyed a Corvet and a battleship, damaged another Corvet, and then later when fighting Drazzan in the Halstrom area, Wyatt's tactics led to the destruction of over 400 fighters. So Wyatt is something different than an Ace. Wraith is much more appropriate.

J.R. Turner

Just gets better with each part.

Jeff Wright

Just one thing I noticed. On the book one Redford says. 30 fighters on its own! We nearly broke my record. After all the Redford record it's a bit far to be broken clocking at 100...

Jaime Nunes

I wonder if Wyatt had ji cho hack Istonels suit so that the smell filters stopped working

Mike MacPherson

I see I’m not the only one

Hawks356

Omg!!! I’ve listened to it almost twice now!!! I love blackship Tuesdays!!!!

Michael O'Brien

You saved several people at my work. I was preparing my own assault on the gallant venture. But this has stayed my hand for another week. LOL

Daniel Davis

What a great way to incorporate the options for his nickname into the story and leaving us wondering what it is.

Hawks356

Fabulous as always

Andi

My work here is done…!!

william lemon

I like this one a lot. Maximilian really gave Wyatt a mighty gift. You warn us about gore but my stomic still flipped. I think it's good to have foul things in stories. Makes the good things even better. Hope this helps the noble change his focuse on studies. Also like how the voted titles got slip in. Keep your ears open folks.

Gady Tuff

Outstanding! Plenty of coverage on different subjects. Not to mention the internal view from characters in the story. Good job!!

Carl Shultz

My joy is almost equal to Wytes!

Adana

Already on my second listen!!

Timothy Groh

Excellent

Jesse Roberson

Excellent as always the imagery is incredible poor poor Istonel finally understands the hatred for drazan

Jeremy Cable

Very good, Wyatt may have a screw loose in his head but this might make it a little less consuming. Now as to the middle part of the story, I think the young Istonel may have a different opinion now that he has seen firsthand what Drazzan do to their cattle.

J.R. Turner

There are no words....

Mad Mouse79

Letssss goooo day just went from shit to a great day

Hawks356

It's out!

Jaime Nunes

Yes

Jeremy Cable


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