The Black Ship - Chapter 46 Part 4
Added 2025-01-21 12:38:19 +0000 UTCWelcome to the Tuesday release of 'The Black Ship'. It's not as long as normal but Ekhinda has assured me its because part 5 is going to be a bigger one.
Enjoy the story and share your thought, as usual in the comments,
Comments
At the end of this all I hope the Wyar Wolfhound Staple Academy is created to offer fair pilot training for all citizens with Wyatt,Maximilian and all the Composters teaching along others. Deserts for all in Cafeteria lol
Jean-marc Ladouceur
2025-03-05 13:38:28 +0000 UTCThey should pick up Wyatt's family to keep them safe from kidnapping and leave Mr Warlo with a way to contact Wyatt if there is disturbance at their house. Can you imagine the boys all reaction if a shuttle to pick them up and Royal Marines having to carry all their fainted bodies aboard lol.
Jean-marc Ladouceur
2025-03-05 13:29:09 +0000 UTCRevisiting this chapter again, I am reminded how reputation can often present itself before personal introduction and interactions. What people believe or think they know about you can shape the interaction you have with them, even if you are unaware of what they know and or believe and how valid that knowledge is. It is not called honor or glory, but credibility and respect that has just as big an impact in how the world around us responds. Choose your path carefully and allow your actions to write the story others will tell about you.
T Griffetts
2025-02-06 17:12:59 +0000 UTCNo. This is just someone taking the story and trying to fool you i to thinking it's legit. It will get sorted out soon.
Dennis McCarthy
2025-01-23 13:52:58 +0000 UTCI take it that Sci-Fi Everyday (on YouTube) is also scifistories1977 since they also posted this same episode Word for Word but with different AI voices. It even has the same disclosures for donations directly to ekhidnawritez on Ko-fi and linking to this Patreon account. Are you testing new voices?
MarkDC
2025-01-23 13:16:34 +0000 UTCI'm curious on what Jade's reaction will be if/when he sees what Wyatt has done
Matt Swayze
2025-01-22 23:50:21 +0000 UTCI can’t wait for the next chapter, this story has me salivating!!
Colin Sland
2025-01-22 19:37:15 +0000 UTCMasterpiece ☝️I’m a Medical Engineer all day at my station listening to the black ship why I’m working away makes my day every Wednesday for me.
Deano
2025-01-22 06:54:23 +0000 UTCDon’t start writing based on opinions bro. Write your story. 20+ minutes is a good length. Just write your story
Jason Wilson
2025-01-22 06:05:47 +0000 UTCI really enjoy the story. Thank you so much! I have so much to say. I'll comment more later
mario Tuatagaloa
2025-01-22 05:51:39 +0000 UTCI really enjoy how you build expectations for the plot without going over the top. Every chapter is well balanced and keeps me wanting more.
Mad Mouse79
2025-01-22 00:59:28 +0000 UTCThis is absolutely my favorite series out there! The effort detail and work you put into this is amazing! We Fukin love you ekhinda!!!
Michael O'Brien
2025-01-21 21:53:39 +0000 UTCHello, everyone. The main reason why this part is a bit short is due to me waiting for the poll results. Thank you all for your love and support!
EkhidnaWritez
2025-01-21 19:17:58 +0000 UTCawesome as always, i dont think words can describe how addicting this story is ;-)
Dredd
2025-01-21 18:40:25 +0000 UTCthey will pass out while watching it hehe
Dredd
2025-01-21 18:37:57 +0000 UTCWell , the last time I notice they talked was after they left Balakura
Jaime Nunes
2025-01-21 18:36:16 +0000 UTCHow will Wyatt's family react to the video? Mr Warlo? How long until Wyatt's family become targets?
Jesse Roberson
2025-01-21 17:45:53 +0000 UTCI am interested to know how often Clara has contacted her brother. In previous episodes, the Prince was concerned at not hearing from Clara. But today, it sounded like they had talked.
Jesse Roberson
2025-01-21 17:41:00 +0000 UTCI’ve become addicted. This is moving forward properly. So engaging. The characters are so well developed.
Chip1217
2025-01-21 16:43:03 +0000 UTCI like this episode, it sets up so many things. Waiting to see when Wyatt's family and Mr. Worlo sees the video that should be one hilarious episode.
rainman2580
2025-01-21 16:31:41 +0000 UTCGreat comment! Thanks for speaking my mind for me.
Vanguard
2025-01-21 16:27:34 +0000 UTCAlways appreciative of every new chapter and always wanting more.
Vanguard
2025-01-21 16:25:34 +0000 UTCGood point wrt Maximilian, might be dishonorable to work with the Astors now, but hunting the Drazan should be fair game since they are an enemy of humanity in general. I'm guessing that Galt might be deserving of an elevation from iirc a disgraced noble, and Salazar deserving of a promotion for his success with the pirate children. The one member of the composters who isn't a noble is probably getting at least a promotion, if not an elevation. This episode already confirmed that Jincho is at least getting promoted to be in Clara's inner circle, maybe made personal mechanic to Wyatt. Wyatt is of course also due for promotion. I wonder if Casimir is going to be the one to keep Felicity from lying. He's suffered greatly due to her already, probably wouldn't tolerate her potentially screwing him over again.
dotnet
2025-01-21 15:10:34 +0000 UTCGreat cliffhanger! Once the battle recording is broadcast to the full network, the ripples created will be wonderful to read! Will Wyatt recruit Siro and Maximillian to hunt the other Drazzan cattle ship? How will House Firentis reward Wyatt? Is Jincho to join Clara's inner circle? Who is getting elevated? Will Wyatt be promoted, I would venture to say yes on that one... lol.. anyone else? Ekhidna, please consider adapting a chapter for a screen play pilot for an animated or live action series (ie. B5, Galatica, Farscape, Expanse). I think the storyline is a natural.
Wesley Byrnside
2025-01-21 14:35:14 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. The next one will be great as well. I know it. I can’t wait for Clara to lay out her plans.
Jason Wilson
2025-01-21 14:28:42 +0000 UTCI wonder if his family will get a look at the video?
Jay Stevens
2025-01-21 14:25:05 +0000 UTCYet another awesome chapter that keeps me on edge, and wanting more.
Javier Cervantes
2025-01-21 14:23:46 +0000 UTCI do wonder when the author first started this just how long was it going to be. It has turned into a compelling story with each episode worthy of repeated listening.
Peter McEvedy
2025-01-21 14:18:27 +0000 UTCNo doubt Jincho can mend it though I dare say his comments will be choice!
Peter McEvedy
2025-01-21 14:15:50 +0000 UTCExcellent episode. - one of your best though would like to hear what the psych report said! Speaking as a now retired doctor, I imagine the medic will find it very difficult!!
Peter McEvedy
2025-01-21 14:14:59 +0000 UTCOne criticism. Maximilian's fighter. What would be left?
Jesse Roberson
2025-01-21 13:37:34 +0000 UTCOnce again Wyatt is receiving well deserved recognition from his former enemies. It is going to be interesting to see when this lead his future. Looking forward to the next installment of this incredible story.
Fred Flint
2025-01-21 13:36:33 +0000 UTCTypical Ekhindr never dare to disappoint us & always astonished us! To my fellow Black Ship addicts, let the long & silent Black Ship watch begin! Until part five don’t forget to write what’s on your mind below!
Adana
2025-01-21 13:33:02 +0000 UTCI think it's on purpose to left us hold on the ropes and he enjoys see us like that. Hanged on the rope like that. We are Jincho!
Jaime Nunes
2025-01-21 13:30:50 +0000 UTCThe best of the day is getting another chapter of such a well-written story. Loyalty is its own reward. Long may you grant us such wonderful entertainments. Just waiting for the next to be even more inspired.
J.R. Turner
2025-01-21 13:30:22 +0000 UTCNow THAT'S how I want to wake up in the morning to🤣🤣🤣🍻🍻
Doug Fisher
2025-01-21 13:26:48 +0000 UTCExcellent, as usual. These episodes are so engrossing I never notice the duration.of the stories but thank.you for every one.
Jayne
2025-01-21 13:25:36 +0000 UTCThe suspense for another week. Spending time looking for twist and interaction to come.
Daniel Davis
2025-01-21 13:24:58 +0000 UTCMan ekhidna I don’t know how you do it to manage to leave on a cliff hanger every time is incredibly and infuriating in equal measure
Jeremy Cable
2025-01-21 13:10:28 +0000 UTCAlready ended? Another amazing episode
Jaime Nunes
2025-01-21 13:02:27 +0000 UTCShort but excellent
David Orf
2025-01-21 13:02:05 +0000 UTCIt's shorter but it's a good one!
Dennis McCarthy
2025-01-21 12:41:13 +0000 UTC
