The Black Ship - Chapter 46 Part 2
Added 2025-01-07 16:40:52 +0000 UTCIt's here! enjoy.
Comments
it would be interesting to see Wyatt practice different melee techniques and weapons in his exercise and practice sessions. not everyone can handle and manage a zwiehander or a claymore. fighting with edge and point are different. maybe he handles one-handed versus two handed styles better? in old times, when you visited a city, it was not uncommon to look up the local sword fighting school or expert and pay them for lessons in the current latest style.
Skeeta_bite
2025-04-08 14:29:00 +0000 UTCI think it’s lintar jade and him have that same look on commoners maybe comander William who knows could just be one of their aids directly under Isthol
Jeremy Cable
2025-01-13 16:36:46 +0000 UTCAnyone else think Hannah Tallaro or however it's spelled is jade?
Mad Mouse79
2025-01-13 15:14:37 +0000 UTCGrace to EkhindaWritz while we wait for the next episode 😇🙃🙂. Hint, hint.
Larry O.
2025-01-12 20:08:01 +0000 UTCThey seem to be the only warriors in the principality that care more about victory than personal glory
Jeremy Cable
2025-01-10 12:51:31 +0000 UTCClara has quite the team, Milkades, Cynthia and Wyatt!!!
Colin Sland
2025-01-09 18:41:12 +0000 UTCMy 5th time listening to this chapter! Ooohh this is so good! Love Cynthia, “I would have carved through them “!!
Colin Sland
2025-01-09 18:40:10 +0000 UTCI've heaped praise on ekhidnawritez previously and buy coffee on Ko-fi with each new release. Does anyone know if there is some sort of wiki for "The Black Ship". There are so many characters, histories and interactions that I'm having difficulty keeping track of all the details. I re-watch and re-watch, re-read and re-read so much, finding a little bit more that I missed here and there. Some sort of Wiki would be super helpful.
MarkDC
2025-01-09 17:03:49 +0000 UTCThis should be stuidied by aspiring writers. No story has enthralled me like this since StarTrec and Star Wars. As I continue to say, EkhindaWritz!
Larry O.
2025-01-08 22:07:03 +0000 UTCDirk Pitt? Awesome. Love his books. Cussler is a master of twisting history with a fun story. T
Jason Wilson
2025-01-08 20:17:11 +0000 UTCYou kill that many people that way, sure why not. Is he a machine or a pyschopath. He’s unlike any other so of course they’re nervous. Except milcades, maybe Cynthia. They see him for what he is. A killing machine who only cares about victory and protecting those he loves.
Jason Wilson
2025-01-08 20:13:42 +0000 UTCYes, Wyatt's family on Walantis must be relocated.
Larry O.
2025-01-08 12:44:07 +0000 UTCAnd what of the spy on the Noranavio? Will the interrogation of Cyntor be useful in this regard?
Larry O.
2025-01-08 12:35:06 +0000 UTCHmmm...the reward for selfless and outstsnding victory is a psych eval? Redford!🤔🧐
Larry O.
2025-01-08 12:29:52 +0000 UTCI was waiting for the follow up chapter to bring it up because I knew they were going to listen to the recording. Wasn't Samuel Cayston's manner of death supposed to be a secret? I would had thought Clara or Cynthia would have said something about it.
Titan
2025-01-08 02:24:58 +0000 UTCPrincess Clara's plan release of the combat footage I Gallant Venture will bind Wyatt closer to her. He will be given a murderous nickname. He will be seen as a slayer of traitorous nobility and commoners who refuses to yield to his leige. The acts of mercy will reenforce that's better to surrender than fight him and by extension the Prince. This along with his role in defeating the Drazzan will create more uncertainty of his true origins.
Peter Armstrong
2025-01-07 22:26:19 +0000 UTCAs usual, excellent. Thank you.
Peter McEvedy
2025-01-07 21:48:13 +0000 UTCAbsolutely AWESOME!! I can hardly wait to see how the Lone Wolf acts when he recovers. It could go either way. Remember, he told Clara that he wouldn’t work under contract for her family as he “liked to keep his head”. I can see the story heading the direction of keeping the “Good Nobels” alive and swearing loyalty to the Asters to correct the direction the Principality is heading with the worthless Nobels. For me, Wyatt is a cross between Dirk Pitt and Maverick. The hero’s hero. Please keep up the good work and don’t let the story go awry by dwelling on an antagonist and making him the focus. (Talking about Jade here). It seems that the reason the Royal Family Lines were terminated should be made more public to the commoners so they know the Aster’s value their lives.
John Myers
2025-01-07 21:32:37 +0000 UTCAnother great episode. More of the background events are being slowly revealed. Filling all the blanks.
Fred Flint
2025-01-07 20:50:59 +0000 UTCIt’s more interesting than actually watching a video
Colin Sland
2025-01-07 20:33:01 +0000 UTCSoooo good, hearing the commentary on Wyatt’s actions is unexpected but very satisfying. This is such a great story, I’m fully invested in the characters and whatever they do!!!!
Colin Sland
2025-01-07 20:32:34 +0000 UTCI love the episodes after Wyatt does some crazy **** and Clara Redford etc recap it lol wanna hear Galts opinion
Michael O'Brien
2025-01-07 20:28:43 +0000 UTCGreat episode !!! I love how your slowly writing this story , filling in the blank pages letting us know what Clara, Cynthia, Milkades and Redford think of Wyatt.
rainman2580
2025-01-07 19:30:49 +0000 UTCSo much anticipated and appreciated that I had to purchase this early to enjoy it. Thanks! I appreciate the excitement of new readers that plead for a TV series, movie, or anime to be created, but hope they come to appreciate the value of this form of artistry that skillfully provides enough parameters so you can visualize and imagine the scenes and then realize the underlying story has captured you with relatable context of experience, wisdom, comedy, and even sorrow. I keep replaying this entire story on YouTube as they are released there and struggle not to add additional comments to chapters I have commented and take time to read other comments about them. I struggle with the comments that want to change this into a romance over the scifi drama storyline. Often I reflect how a personal experience might relate to a portion the author has penned. We have to acknowledge that this venue of literature opens up our imagination and dreams, inspiring us with what might be possible now or in the future. Replaying this continues to offer insight on aspects and the patrons that follow and comment on the story. I'll comment more on the story when released to YouTube so that I have time to listen a few times and appreciate all the details the author has penned for our imagination, and storyline. - tg
T Griffetts
2025-01-07 19:23:41 +0000 UTCOutstanding!!!
Chip1217
2025-01-07 18:34:19 +0000 UTCRight! I’d love to help fund this bitch. It’s a true epic. Imagine this as a series. I hope he can finish it. He’s got a monster but if he tames it it’s got the potential to be a gold mine. I tell my guys this is space version of game of thrones. They’re all hooked.
Jason Wilson
2025-01-07 18:29:03 +0000 UTCYesss love the idea where can I get my hands on it.
Wild Card
2025-01-07 18:28:54 +0000 UTCWhat a great downshift heading into a tight corner. Knuckles you got a monster on your hands. Love it. The next few parts of working out the details of the fleet repairs, the gains, the cattle ship, the rewards can’t wait to see what you do. As I said before I think the staples need witness protection. Also I’d kill all adult drazzen, I’d give the kid all the saplings. There’s 10 million. Can’t wait to her Clara on her victory tour. I’d give the destroyer to galt. Reinstate his previous rank but I’m a believer in second chances. I can’t wait see how he chooses to go with the lone wolf. Imagine Clara having Wyatt and a lone wolf. Well thanks for the fix. Great chapter guys.
Jason Wilson
2025-01-07 18:25:02 +0000 UTCJust can’t get enough of the story, always looking forward to the next chapter. Great job, and thank you!
Javier Cervantes
2025-01-07 18:23:33 +0000 UTCSoooo, white stag hoodie merch when?
Devin
2025-01-07 18:19:28 +0000 UTCOk now I’m worried drazzan coming in through Gimore territory on top of Wyats new fame incoming his family is in real danger they need to send a transport to get them out and on to a loyal ship because if something happens to his family there is not a thing in the universe that will stop Wyatt’s vengence
Jeremy Cable
2025-01-07 18:04:11 +0000 UTCWe do not see all the action, for instance after he lets a bunch of people go they hear one of their "headstrong" colleagues groups dying,
David Orf
2025-01-07 18:02:09 +0000 UTCAs always, great work and can’t wait for the next one.
Laurance
2025-01-07 17:57:43 +0000 UTCI got my hit if black ship but need an another, I’m now an addicted of the book. Just tell me what you need for me to get the next chapter!!!
Wild Card
2025-01-07 17:55:45 +0000 UTCSo good.
Joe
2025-01-07 17:50:39 +0000 UTCNice breakdown of all concerned, Wyatt's life is about to get a lot more complicated.
David Finleyson
2025-01-07 17:46:03 +0000 UTCholy Sh*t 145 people I did think Wyatt had killed so many people. I to would get a full psychological evaluation on Wyatt.
Wild Card
2025-01-07 17:44:25 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!!
Hindarsfjall
2025-01-07 17:40:53 +0000 UTCGreat job
Patrickh Brinson
2025-01-07 17:39:46 +0000 UTCNice
Jeremy Cable
2025-01-07 17:36:02 +0000 UTCI have finally stopped twitching!
The huntsmen
2025-01-07 17:26:39 +0000 UTCNow what will become of Sir Wyatt? Now that Clara knows he is a ruthless killer but still humane if the situation calls for it. It might become an issue that he gains many commoners and lesser houses to pledge fealty to his banner out of respect for his "honor". This could be seen as a boost to House Astor since he is a bannerette for Clara. I must say very nicely written and I am waiting for more with bated breath... lol
J.R. Turner
2025-01-07 17:20:06 +0000 UTCI'm late 😪
Jose Barahona Lopez
2025-01-07 17:18:30 +0000 UTCExcellent
Jesse Roberson
2025-01-07 17:11:47 +0000 UTC
