The Black Ship - Chapter 46 Part 1
Added 2024-12-30 11:43:53 +0000 UTCThe best way to end the year. Enjoy this latest chapter and let us know what you think.
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A measure of one's greatness is best through the eyes of others, when measured by reflecting on it personally you can fall victim to overlooking the circumstances that lead up to that greatness. When others bestow the honors and testimony upon you it is important to maintain true to yourself and not allow it to make you believe you are without equals or accountable to others. When you take time to acknowledge the factors that foster the greatness in achievements the confidence to act and succeed are reinforced from the sources you require for the strength to do so, and the sources you draw from are reassured in supporting your effort. Redford remained open to tactics proposed by Wyatt, The squadron fighters supported Wyatt to survive the Gallant Venture fighters, his wingman recovering him from the fighter he ejected out of and allowing Wyatt to get permission from Clara to board Gallant Venture, then his wingman transported him in time to assault the Gallant Venture before the Royal Marines were dispatched. These all contributed to the successes attributed to Wyatt proving that greatness rarely stands upon its own but is a result of many that share in it
T Griffetts
2025-02-06 18:42:25 +0000 UTCI think Princess Clara will promote W/O Dakar to Ensign. After his promotion Lt.Staples can sponsor Dakar for the three basic implants with the Princess's assent. Ensigns Olkara, Otilo, and Undaj to should be promoted to Sub-Lieutenant by the Princess Clara.
Peter Armstrong
2025-01-06 00:16:27 +0000 UTCThing I like too see. ( 1 ) Jincho and crew join Wyatt house and make him a Lieutenant. It give them a safe place in the Principality. I mean who better , well maybe Princess Clara. ( 2 ) give all the other ships in the traitor fleet " Wyatt Mercy " . [ to the Author one of the best Si Fi stories i ever read !!! ] Thank You.
Regan Ransford
2025-01-03 18:37:16 +0000 UTCHmmm, we know of a certainty that the fear of Clara, Cynthia, The Royal Marines, and The Blackships is anchored in the Drazzen's psychy. The Royal Marines could give him more gifts. Will he get better armour?🤔 So many possibilities one's head can spin!🫣
Larry O.
2025-01-02 20:01:38 +0000 UTCI can't get enough of this Blackship stuff! I have no need to go to the movies now. What ever will I do when Liana's Ranger is added?
Larry O.
2025-01-02 19:58:33 +0000 UTCI am of the opinion that investigations in the Cattle Ship could show that the Drazzan are not as strong as the Astorian Principality and that the Nornavio takes its small fleet into the Drazzan volumetric and wipes them out for good. After that Princess Clara becomes the champion of the Human Nations and the Duke Draymore rebellion collaspes. Then Princess Clara marries Wyatt Staples and the Astorian Principality enters a new age where commoners are no longer discriminated against.
Glenn Fordyce
2025-01-01 12:57:43 +0000 UTCYeah I can relate this story has me hooked like nothing I’ve ever heard before this story will wind up gaining major traction I can both sci-fi stories and ekhidna doing well off this story if they stick together this story as multiple series movie would do incredible if you can get the fella who done avatar to do the cg
Jeremy Cable
2024-12-31 16:03:26 +0000 UTCI was thinking the same thing have jincho go through all the fighters to bring them up to Wyatt’s last fighter then modify the guts out of his new one
Jeremy Cable
2024-12-31 16:00:25 +0000 UTCI think that’s coming soon. This part is just the conclusion of The two wars and Wayte returned to Noirnavio to his bed. The next few parts is Cynthia coming back and summarizing what happened, giving several accolades and congratulations etc
Adana
2024-12-31 05:15:06 +0000 UTCHow will Wyatt’s exemplary performance be recognized? Promotion to Captain? New fancy fighters for the Composters and hum? More money? New noble title? More implants? Lone Wolf training? Can’t wait to see.
Vanguard
2024-12-31 04:13:19 +0000 UTCIt was a good chapter. There was one addition I would like to have seen. Something like Clara questioning Wyatt or slightly admonishing him about shooting off Casimir's arm and leg and Wyatt responding with "You told me not to kill him and well, he's still alive". And Cynthia giving a laugh and a smirk at that.
Mike Kirgan
2024-12-31 03:17:25 +0000 UTCI know how jincho feels 😂 book is awesome give me 😂
Deano
2024-12-31 02:35:39 +0000 UTCSo listened twice now. Missed much my first go through. Things I look forward too. What’s Wyatt’s reward, he did defeat 350 fighters (his plan) took out a destroyer, crippled the cattle ship, and took down the lone wolf. Then boarded and captured a destroyer which lead to two frigates as well (or is it 3?). Captured cintor and cayston. Huge accomplishments again. I can see Clara awarding lands and possibly buying him a jincho fighter. Also I’d look forward to the full debrief. Cynthia and milkades mission outcomes. What’s their true thoughts on Wyatt’s accolades. Finally, in time. Can’t wait to hear what ole duke D says about one guy taking or destroying so many of his black ships? Once he learns. Wyatt’s family is gonna need new identities and relocation. lol. Thanks guys!
Jason Wilson
2024-12-31 00:22:47 +0000 UTCFor real I was blown away short but so good and it's keeping my addiction undercontrol
Dallas Cruze
2024-12-30 21:07:03 +0000 UTCSame
Dallas Cruze
2024-12-30 21:05:59 +0000 UTCCan I just say I Fing Love Jincho
Dallas Cruze
2024-12-30 21:03:19 +0000 UTCalways the highlight of the week.
Ruben Sierzputowski
2024-12-30 20:18:10 +0000 UTCMan I feel like a addicted getting a fix, all I can think about is when will I get the next one. Love this series plz continue to give us more of the black ship. Loyalty is his own reward.
Wild Card
2024-12-30 19:28:18 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter. The repartees between the characters are very well written and subtle. I can truly play out in my mind the actual events as they are happening. Thanks - appreciated.
Mike Holman
2024-12-30 18:44:30 +0000 UTCIt's the same voice. It can change ever so slightly between chapters/parts due to the nature of the AI voice creation, but it's definitely the same voice.
Dennis McCarthy
2024-12-30 18:22:42 +0000 UTCIs this a new narrator for this chapter? It sounds different to me than the other ones
Darwin Johnson
2024-12-30 18:19:39 +0000 UTCI'm on android and it's working. Perhaps close down the app, as in end the process and re-open? Is it working on the mobile for everyone else?
Dennis McCarthy
2024-12-30 17:43:08 +0000 UTCOk new at Patreon on my phone. Pressed the arrow. Still not playing. Any advice?
Jean-marc Ladouceur
2024-12-30 17:21:56 +0000 UTCOutstanding!
Brian Page
2024-12-30 17:18:25 +0000 UTCFANTASTIC !!! I agree with Carl Shultz I felt like Jincho , when I saw this episode was here.
rainman2580
2024-12-30 17:12:45 +0000 UTCWow, this was unexpected and absolutely made my day. I’m just grinning from ear to ear right now 😃
Colin Sland
2024-12-30 17:07:39 +0000 UTCCynthia is going to train him hard I can see that coming
Patrickh Brinson
2024-12-30 16:56:13 +0000 UTCBrilliant chapter, as usuall and cant wait to see Maksimilian reaction on Wyatt...
Boris
2024-12-30 16:19:23 +0000 UTCAgreed I’ve been anticipating this deescalation he’s done a excellent job with this one realistic along with excellent storyline telling
Jeremy Cable
2024-12-30 15:49:55 +0000 UTCgreat transition love the story and the way you tell the story.
Duane Morris
2024-12-30 15:29:35 +0000 UTCThat’s the good stuff! So needed it.
The huntsmen
2024-12-30 14:25:19 +0000 UTCVery good translation. A excellent way to enter a new year. Thank you for the an outstanding story. Looking forward to the next installment.
Fred Flint
2024-12-30 14:23:46 +0000 UTCWonderful chapter! Will wait for next chapter with anticapation.
J.R. Turner
2024-12-30 14:04:24 +0000 UTCI totally see Wyatt upgrading his squadron with just better everything
Joseph K Cheadle
2024-12-30 13:32:02 +0000 UTCDefinitely seems Cynthia is the one who’s truly interested in him as a companion
Jeremy Cable
2024-12-30 13:19:00 +0000 UTCI opined in an earlier post that the noble he saved with his bio foam might be another Astor stowed away on the Gallant Venture (maybe Caldro?) If Clara sees the footage and recognizes him. Wouldn't that be a twist, saving a second Astor.
Mike Bullers
2024-12-30 13:15:00 +0000 UTCExcellent - a good way to enter the New Year. Thank you to all involved - writer and publisher.
Peter McEvedy
2024-12-30 13:08:24 +0000 UTCNot took but too.
Carl Shultz
2024-12-30 12:57:36 +0000 UTCI thought that was an excellent end to this whole taking of the hastrung? system. And I took would like to get and inkling of Clara's viewing of his helmet footage. Also I was very pleasantly surprised to find this edition this morning. I felt like Jincho acted. Is it possible we will get another edition by the end of the week???? Or at least a target date of our next one??
Carl Shultz
2024-12-30 12:56:28 +0000 UTCI really hope we get to see Clara's POV when she is checking the helmet cam. I wanna hear her thoughts on it as they come
bryce york
2024-12-30 12:19:42 +0000 UTCBravo, I assume Wyatt will be promoted soon, if he's smart he'll have Cynthia train his squadron as well, and I see him married to a Winfield after this conflict is over
Joseph K Cheadle
2024-12-30 12:10:34 +0000 UTCLet’s go!!!!
Michael O'Brien
2024-12-30 11:49:44 +0000 UTCDamn I'll take second then lol
Amerhen
2024-12-30 11:46:35 +0000 UTCLoyalty is its on reward !
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