The Black Ship - Chapter 45 Part 9a (Graphic Descriptions)
Added 2024-12-15 13:26:09 +0000 UTCHere is the Patreon only version for people who like an un-edited, richly filled narative of Wyatt doing his thing! This same part will be out on YouTube later today but edited without as much of the descriptive narrative to comply with the community guidelines.
Part 9b will be out tomorrow at a similar time to today.
Enjoy!
Comments
Just got back from fishing. It’s late I’m tired, may not make it through but I’m excited to hear it. At least I’m off tom so either way I’ll be caught up.
Jason Wilson
2024-12-16 09:04:33 +0000 UTCDefiantly glad the writer is remembering the finer details such as the soul snatchers charge needing turned on and having a limit and minor details like that in the middle of rushing to write this story. Great story and can’t wait for the next one.
Laurance
2024-12-16 06:02:28 +0000 UTCThe Patreon version is much more anticipatory and image building
Jeremy Cable
2024-12-16 04:28:16 +0000 UTCTeam Wyatt
JustTheFactsMa'am
2024-12-16 02:54:38 +0000 UTCLove the version we get on patreon so much more than youtube version. Awesome 👍👍👍
Mark Clark
2024-12-16 02:20:52 +0000 UTCI can't even wait till tomorrow just awesomeness!
Eric Bray
2024-12-16 01:11:28 +0000 UTCI didn’t think of that but now that you said it it clicks
Jeremy Cable
2024-12-15 23:12:50 +0000 UTCKinda suspecting that this noble is actually Casimir and there was some sort of falling out on the bridge leading to this.
dotnet
2024-12-15 22:33:55 +0000 UTCWyatt is showing "True Blueblood" actions. He is ruthless and efficient, but he also cares for those who treat commoners respectfully. He is earning respect and acknowledgment from all who see him perform this event. As to what will come of this, I am not sure, but he will receive support from many of the noble houses for being loyal to Astor's house and being fair to those who do not raise weapons against him. Now to the Author: Wonderful world-building, very good and realistic action. I will be waiting for the next chapter with anticipation.
J.R. Turner
2024-12-15 21:02:03 +0000 UTCI am like crazyswede79, totally captivated and on the edge, thank you scifistories1977
DennisT
2024-12-15 20:54:20 +0000 UTChad me on the edge of my seat the entire episode, jesus this is sooo good, frikkin epic, cant wait for part 9B tomorrow.
Dredd
2024-12-15 19:32:57 +0000 UTCThe author never misses
MRDOOM59
2024-12-15 19:18:13 +0000 UTCWow...... Amazing as always! Much respect and thank you again.
Samb
2024-12-15 19:04:04 +0000 UTCI think the Noble that Wyatt helped save will turn out to be from an important house . And because of Wyatt doing that , it will earn that Noble’s House’s support from Duke Draymor to House Astor and the prince.
Darwin Johnson
2024-12-15 18:35:34 +0000 UTCBest I would think is he would be promoted in the Navy. Don’t know what that rank would be, Lieutenant-Commander? Lieutenant 1st class? But I don’t see home gaining another title just yet, but I do see him moving ever closer to a Lone Wolf.
TheDreadDonzarion
2024-12-15 18:06:19 +0000 UTCMan love this Story can’t wait for the next episode. The level of detail is incredible. Love the Wyatt is not some Mindless killing machine, each decision is made based off his goal, but also mercy. That last section when he saved that young noble will be of use in the long run and the old commoner lady she’s also gonna be a big help in the future.
Wild Card
2024-12-15 17:21:13 +0000 UTCIn the spirit of the holidays, I can only say Ho-Ho-Holy Shit! That was great!
TheDreadDonzarion
2024-12-15 17:20:52 +0000 UTCThat was awesome!
Javier Cervantes
2024-12-15 17:19:45 +0000 UTCAnother amazing episode, those 40 min ended very quickly. I just want to see the reach to the bridge deck!
Jaime Nunes
2024-12-15 16:56:57 +0000 UTCSo help me out here, if Wyatt were to get another title due to his aid and participation in this battle what would be next from his current title?? (If he were to gain let's say 2 titles above his current one) And the Royal Marines are no where in sight. I guess it's a good thing we get 9b tomorrow.
Jose Barahona Lopez
2024-12-15 16:11:26 +0000 UTC40 min long?? Dis gonna be gud.
TheDreadDonzarion
2024-12-15 15:48:41 +0000 UTCFantastic !!! This was well worth the wait and tomorrow will be glorious.
rainman2580
2024-12-15 15:31:06 +0000 UTCShould be subtitled "Wyatt redecorates the Gallant Venture"
David Orf
2024-12-15 15:02:19 +0000 UTCI like to think that first group of commoners that just straight up surrendered saw the carnage and did the whole "nope nope that's a lot of nope"
Frank Carrion
2024-12-15 14:54:26 +0000 UTCI am so glad I have no sleep schedule
Frank Carrion
2024-12-15 14:39:28 +0000 UTCThis was amazing. Love you guys who make this happen. And thank you for the length of the video
Emanuel Jackson
2024-12-15 14:35:19 +0000 UTC❤️
Larry O.
2024-12-15 14:27:38 +0000 UTCAlready listening to it again
Alexander Ohar
2024-12-15 14:25:28 +0000 UTCIf the noble lives, does Wyatt gain his first noble follower?
Jesse Roberson
2024-12-15 14:24:57 +0000 UTCThat was the muts nuts the anticipation and the humour was spot on, left me smiling.. Go Wyatt! Well done to you both, well written and as always well executed audio and visuals 👏
Kevin Morgan
2024-12-15 14:23:10 +0000 UTC40 minutes never went so fast.
Jesse Roberson
2024-12-15 14:20:52 +0000 UTCit's a bit shorter but not too much. Most the difference is the tonned down language and level of detail.
Dennis McCarthy
2024-12-15 14:15:22 +0000 UTCSomething tells me that Wyatt's last act just turned his reputation from an unstoppable killer chained by the reaper to an undomitable harbinger of justice.
bryce york
2024-12-15 14:15:06 +0000 UTCI suspect the YouTube will therefore be quite short!! I look forward to the bridge scene! Wyatt seems to have become rather more bloodthirsty following contact with nobility - although Drazzan clearly would always be treated with no mercy.
Peter McEvedy
2024-12-15 14:12:23 +0000 UTCExcellent story such anticipation man I love this story
Jeremy Cable
2024-12-15 14:12:09 +0000 UTC
