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A failed comic

Unfinished comic :)


I didn't like the way this turned out. So i ended up changing it (you'll see that posted today as well).

Downside is we lose Peach. But i felt like she wasn't adding anything to the comic anyway.

See the comic on my site:  https://didcomics.com/comic/marisu/marisu-meets-princess-daisy/

What do you think? Do you prefer this one, or the one i posted (dialog would be largely similar)?

Comments

Their hands (in the posted one) are actually tied to the back of the chair. But i guess i can see your point :(

TBH, the changed version is a little odd, because the ladies appear to be struggling to escape the chairs which they aren't tied to at all. If they had been tied to poles like this, it would make a bit more sense. Besides, you could have had Peach's reaction to Daisy dissing her.

Mark


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