CH24 - Tartered

And so it begins

Eldar Zecore

posted a schedule post!

Mosef

Not gonna lie that is one dope title dawn bringer. This just crossed my mind but Aegons sword is made from valerian steel, right?

Master Zen

This was a great chapter! I can't wait to see everyone's reaction( especially because I think they're going to find out at the family get together at the tourney) to him basically in on day doing more than Dameon did in years in his stepstone war. I also think that his title will probably be Dawn Bringer due to his speech.

Jordan

On second reread listening to those songs made it so much more epic.

Jordan

This is quite a pleasant early chapter release but how does the schedule for the next chapter look like with the early release?

Master Zen

Right! I think both Daemon and Viserys will start to feel inferior to Aegon. Especially if Aegon does defeat the triachy. If anything I feel this will push the greens to do everything in their power to get Aegon on their side. I can also see Daemon’s ego being hurt so much that he might not approach Aegon to gain for an allegiance simply out of pride. But I can also see him just demanding it saying he’s older than him. I’m not sure if anyone has seen Ahsoka show but I can see Aegon making an entrance back when he gets back to kings landing the same way Thrawn did in that show. Man I can’t wait for the next chapters 🤤

John

I am glad you decided to post this chapter early. I have to say that this chapter has me on the edge of my seat eager for more. I simply cannot wait to see what will happen next. I love how Aegon basically used Dany's canon plan to get the Unsullied but he also unlike Dany knows that if he wants his efforts to last he has to have people to govern and and defend Astapor, though in Dany's defense she was never educated on how to rule, something she decided to teach herself once she reached Mereeen. I love the fact that Aegon and his chief advisors realized they did not account for the amount of riches they would manage to acquire, Uthrik said it best, they are suffering from a problem many would die happily with. Aegon's speech at the final scene really got my blood pumping for more, hell I could literally imagine myself there witnessing it, that was how good it was. I have no doubt that Aegon's legacy and deed will far surpass that of his brothers and that of Aegon the Conqueror and Jaehaerys the wise. I look forward to seeing the reactions of everyone in back in Westeros as well as those in Essos. I think Viserys will come to realise how much he underestimated his younger brother and how he Viserys no longer has any power over Aegon and his actions, all he can do is just sit and watch. Still at least Aegon's most recent actions will silence all his detractors who claim that he is a slaver in all but name. No doubt Aegon's future actions will make them all regret having ever slighted him and wonder is he will one day plan on avenging himself on them for the slights they levied against him. I am also most curious as to what Daemon's reaction will be, the brother he has the least favorable relationship with has surpassed him by leap and bounds and is now basically going to accomplish what Daemon tried but failed to do, which is destroy the Triachy. Looking forward to what happens next.

Sukhraj Singh

”To the east, Volantis, who depended greatly and utterly on the slave trade and whom would be absolutely wroth – and fearful – of what was happening here.” Should be west instead of east. Otherwise a banger of chapter. Can’t wait for the reactions.

GooseElite

Haha I can almost see Daemons rage when he finds out Aegon the Liberator totally upstaged him.

Kunta

Thank you for putting that idea in my head! I like the idea of the unsullied, at the end of things in liberty bay, the Unsullied decide to adopt orphans and the like into their mini society.

Mosef

Awesome chapter, honestly I just can't wait for the next one! Especially to see the reactions of the rest of the world, I imagine after Aegon has taken Yunkai.

Stephan Bucher

I cannot wait for the next chapter and ultimately the views of everyone on essos and Westeros on what has happened and will continue to happen. Am I the only one that can just imagine the evolution of the unsullied into this worlds version of Mandalorians with their own idiosyncrasies and accepting people into their way of life.

Abdi

Damn the last chapter when Aegon was sailing to now Liberty Bay I literally played the winds of winter theme. And here when he gave his speech I heard the mhysa theme. My god the chills it gave me. I now can say that our Aegon’s legacy will surpass his brothers by a long shot but also surpass that of the Aegon the Conqueror. Aegon the Liberator. Oh man I can wait to see Westeros reaction. Especially those of greens and blacks. At this point it’s going to be a global phenomenon. The butterfly effects. Man thank you for this early chapter I got really excited. Hope we get more soon lol.

John

Holy crap I got goosebumps at the speech tftc

Duy

Damn sorry about that. Thank you for the early release as always your story is so good and this chap really gave my the chills as now Essos knows that it’s about to change.

Dragonslayer29

Fine! I'll never release early again if you hate it so much (you missed out a 'not' I think lol. Dw word skips happens to me too lol)

Mosef

More than fine with the switch up. This chapter was fire! I love that he used Dany’s plan for to get the unsullied. Liberty Bay and Bravos are going to squeeze the slaver cities between them over time. Can’t wait to see what they do in the future.

Lictor Magnus

I LOVE YOU ❤❤❤

Yuli Dayana

Welp, there goes my plan for sleep.

Yesman

Dragonslayer29