CH10 Tartered Dragon
Added 2023-08-16 22:07:09 +0000 UTCAnd here is the final amendment of CH10...25K words.
Let me know what you thought of the last two chapters!
I probably won't work on Tartered Dragon again this month and will likely make a few more changes to CH11 as I write CH12 next month.
Comments
Love it! I am glad you decided to rewrite. Its very well done and it feels more organic and believable now. I also think Gael is more likeable character now.
FangRu
2023-09-01 11:59:30 +0000 UTC
