Tyranny 6.3
Added 2018-07-07 05:28:04 +0000 UTCAnd after way too long, it's finally done.
I'm not sure I captured all of the emotions in here that I wanted to as well as I wanted to, but at this point, I'm just ready for it to be finished. It gave me way too much trouble, but that's this arc in a nutshell, so...
As for the chapter itself, there were a lot of things happening and even more hints of things to come sprinkled throughout. Lisa's manipulations should be fairly obvious, but even if she's not completely lying about all of her reasons, there are some things she's saying that are solely to win the argument. Just keep that in mind?
Our surprise guest is probably not so big a surprise. I'm sure a lot of people expected her, but such is the inevitable struggle of writing fanfiction — as long as you're in territory covered by canon, there are going to be things that the fans can predict about the story.
Ah, well.
Comments
What's the big issue? That Amy couldn't magic away Noelle's problems?
Secular Reason
2018-07-29 04:30:39 +0000 UTCFirst point, he's in Grand/Order. Two, I read this just after reading FateKaleid Prisma Taylor where Taylor's Origin is 'Sacrifice' which I think would really resonate with Kiritsugu's personality. For your third point, that's one of the reasons I changed my opinion after reading this chapter.
Matthew Rogers
2018-07-27 15:40:16 +0000 UTCWhy would it be Kiritsugu? One, I doubt he's even a heroic spirit. Two, why would she have hang-ups with Installing him when she's installed Assassins such as Hassan-what's-his-face. Three, why would Kiritsugu be able to do anything, here? His origin bullet works on magic, not parahuman powers.
Demetre Saghliani
2018-07-09 04:33:51 +0000 UTCI liked it, but I'm still not sure why Lisa would kill herself like that; did she really consider Taylor that much of a friend? Otherwise, the only thing I noticed was the Tuxedo Kamen reference. Would Taylor be familiar with that?
Peter Christensen-Calvin
2018-07-07 22:33:03 +0000 UTCIs the hero she first turned into and keeps rejecting heroic spirit Khepri? (I thought Kiritsugu first but this fits better after this chapter)
Matthew Rogers
2018-07-07 07:39:04 +0000 UTC
