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Wet Nightmares 3.4 - Rewriting the protagonist.

The re-write is progressing quickly, I decided to rewrite him because I want to give you an interesting protagonist, not a douche bag. So, the protagonist went from: “are you a prostitute?” to “do you want a coffee?”  (example below. Sorry, but first I need to work in Spanish to make the translation at the end.)

And I think it's better for what I want about this visual novel. BUT! The next patch likely won’t contain the second chapter, however, because of time restraints, but the first chapter will be much beefier as a result. I hope to release the patch soon, turns out the end of November might be very busy indeed. 


Thank you for reading me, guys! I'll keep working.



Comments

I see. Thanks.

Erkerut Demonheart

That might be a translation issue, but normally people don't use the word "prostitute" in casual talks. They say hooker or something else, since the word "prostitute" is just a pile-up on the vocal cord. So yeah, a fine change, that is.

Absentia

I don't know about that. I'm Mexican.

Erkerut Demonheart

So basically you removed him wearing black air forces and replaced them with white one's instead

TheMessage04


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