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Weekly Summary – Week 39

Hey everyone!

On Thursday, version 0.13 was released. However, I’ve noticed a decline in overall interest from the community. This honestly leaves me quite frustrated, because I don’t fully understand the reason behind it.

Please, share more feedback with me so I can see things more clearly. My guess is that maybe something has become repetitive or tiresome. After all, you’ve been spending time with Lisa for several months now, and perhaps the main heroine has started to feel too familiar.

This chapter contains a lot of Lisa’s selfies. Personally, I think they look great — taken in many different locations, each with its own atmosphere.

Right now, I can only speculate whether the issue is in the visuals or the storyline. That’s why I’m really looking forward to hearing your honest opinions. Your feedback is what helps me move the project in the right direction.

Comments

You have a great story in your hands. In the unique factor, you have the system with the choices and repercussion in the "Freedom", "Lust" and "Love". Nice touch. The art is amazing and the characters are fine. I think your problem is the pacing of the story. It's almost like you are trying to please everybody, when, in the begining, you would just skip some of the branches of the story (like when you don't go the karl submission route). You add new faces that don't move the story foward. I agree with the comment above. You are in the blowjob loop. Move foward, when the shit happens you begin the "what now?". She will try to reconnect? Will she delve into the NTR? How will they compromise in the NTRS? If necessary, take a break and plan the road ahead. Make some simple endings, we are getting too many branches and we, as players, can't even imagine when this game will end. Don't try to squeese the story too much. Every chapter must have a purpose. Ask yourself "what i am adding to the story now?", and be frank with us when you need some fillers. All in all, great story and game.

Gabriel LeBelouve

I usually play the NTR and NTS branches, and I think the character stories haven't deepened as much as they did in the beginning. For example, Karl was one of the first targets in the NTR branch, and his story was explored from chapter 1 to chapter 13. So, who did Lisa's eagerly awaited first NTR relationship end up with? Her neighbor... I feel like these kinds of situations become commonplace without a deep backstory like Karl's or her ex-boyfriend's. Let's take the bar scene in the NTS branch. There's not a single scene of Lisa with other guys in chapter 13... just a few pictures, get drunk, and leave. So, who did she have her first relationship with in the NTS branch? Karl... I expect it in the NTR branch instead of the NTS branch. In this scene, even Lisa never contacted the MC. as summary, these topics created a conflict with the last chapter, instead of what I expected. I don't think the story deepened correctly but you can improve it in the next chapter. I love playing your game and I know it will get better. Good luck.

Unkown Worker


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