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Dovile on the divan

I’m ambivalent about this series:

Dovile and I set out to do some erotic images.

But shooting them, I felt I couldn’t get light or poses to work as I wanted.

I can’t tell you what didn’t work, but something was off.

And I’m not that fond of the images. I can’t figure out whether it’s the feeling I had when shooting them or they are not good.

Something feels off about them.

I know that I’m not always the best judge of my work (I think that goes for a lot of us), so please let me know your thoughts.

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Comments

Hi Thomas Yes, judging your own work is not easy, I know it all too well. If you ask me, these pictures lack a bit of localization in space, more perspective. The light source and, above all, the camera a little lower down could have made a difference. But of course the room at the back also has to be right (I don't know what happens there). The light source a little lower and the camera as high (or even higher) could work with an even tighter composition. But it's not the model's fault, I think her expression is great. You asked, that's what I think at first glance.

Daniel Brändli


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