This isn't a completed render, just a screenshot of the image currently being rendered. It's maybe 3% complete.
As I work on images, I "tune up" the script, because new ideas come to me. Improvements on the action, what the characters say, and sometimes that takes the scene in a new direction. I don't know how many of you do any creative writing, but often characters seem to take on a life of their own. It doesn't feel like I'm the writer - I'm just documenting what they're doing. Probably sounds weird but it's true and very common.
I love the way Kerren is treating the MC now, as he licks her out. He's just a tool to give her pleasure. Kerren is a pure hedonist, with no real goals except to pursue her own pleasure. He just has to take it, follow instructions, and hope he pleases her. If he doesn't? Well, he doesn't really know what she'll do, but she's capable of doing anything she wants to him. He knows how driven women are to get what they want since the Change, and he's seen first-hand what they're capable of when they lose control. She is small compared to him, but if she lost control and let loose on him in a rage, he knows he would not survive that.