Need Help
Added 2024-01-01 17:30:13 +0000 UTCOnce again I am turning to you guys for some help. This time it’s for When The Cat Becomes The Mouse. So here’s the set up. Edward is the first and only Cullen to have been caught so far. He was caught with a handful of his allies. Instead feeling like the ones who got away he stayed and fought thinking he could easily killed the guards. Now he is being brought into the throne room to be tried for his crimes. What I need from you guys is some ideas on what should happen to Edward when he gets there. I’ve been stuck on this because I’ve got to many ideas and it’s jumbling all my thoughts on it. Any help would be appreciated. Thank you in advance for all the amazing ideas I know you guys will give me.
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I'm going to expand on the idea I thought would mess with Edward the most. Victoria gift she can literally hide in plain sight. Let Victoria hide in plain sight maybe dressed as a guard. Let him see and hear how Bella has changed when Victoria entered the meadow. All the while the Queens are holding court like usual. Let him slowly start to snap with each moment Victoria shares until she is finally in front of him with Bella and Rose. Like the queens are asking his accomplices question but Edward can't properly tune in because of what he's seeing. And he can't sense Victoria so it's like he's going crazy. When everyone finally pays attention Bella is right there with Vic and Rose. The last memory should be of Emmett's death.
JusTay
2024-01-04 17:27:41 +0000 UTCOk. So I started from the beginning by reading what you have so far. All 50 chapters. If Edward is going to be the first one to go before the queens, I think Rose, Vic and Bella should be the ones to talk to him first. They should thank him for leaving Bella behind so that Bella could meet her true mates. Bella should let him know that she has always had feeling for Rose and not him. They should let him know they are together and that he was never Bella's mate. That she is his singer and nothing else. Let him know that he should have never gone after Bella knowing that Bella was Rose's mate. Than take turns beating the shit out of him. If he tries to attack Bella, she should use her shield and crack his body up.
Sandy
2024-01-03 05:39:25 +0000 UTC
