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Give Me Some Ideas

I’m at my computer right now trying to work on a chapter of The Hidden Princess. I’m stuck once again. I need some direction. So what do you guys think I should have Athenodora, Rosalie, Bella and Didyme do to Edward, Carlisle and Esme to get them to talk? The more violent and painful the better!!

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I think you should approach it like you approached my own worst enemy. Carlise Edward and Esme being a triad. Let Esme watch as they drink human blood, then plot twist Eddie marks Carlise and the guards drag them away. Being a newly mated couple and not being able to seal the bond somebody's going to tlk.

JusTay

You could have one of the them waterboarded as a tortured and have the water mixed with blood or completely replaced and the others have to watch as that one starts to lose it.

Dani Tanselle


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