Need Some Help
Added 2023-12-06 15:36:07 +0000 UTCAlright guys I’m coming to you for help again. I was asked to write a story for one of my lovely followers. It’s a great idea but I’m having trouble getting the words out. It would about Bella getting into an accident on the reservation and needing blood. That blood would be from one of the shifters. Then the thing with Bella going to Italy with Alice happens but when Bella meets Athenodora she is triggered somehow and transforms into a wolf. She imprints on Athenodora and in return becomes Athenodora’s mate. That’s the bare bones of it. What I need from you guys is should I just write a cute story about the queen and her wolf or should we have some kind of conflict and if there is conflict what should it be? I really like the idea but I hate writing about the wolf pack because I think they are all horrible especially in regards to Leah. I would rather leave them out of it. Unless it’s to kill them all off. Except for Leah and Seth. So hit up the comments with what you guys think. Not that I will admit it but I wouldn’t mind making it a cute love story. Not that I’m a sap. I just don’t know what everyone would prefer.
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Love these ideas!
Cass Medeiros
2023-12-15 15:10:21 +0000 UTCThere are some really good idea’s here. Common thread of the 3 amigo’s Bella, Leah & Seth forming their own Pack w/Bella as the Alpha. I also like the idea of Seth & Leah Imprinting on the Witch Twins, but how to explain their presence in Italy? It could be that when it came to the blood transfusion, Bella got blood from Seth & Leah, against Sam’s orders, so the strange Alpha bond formed that way, even before Bella shifts for the first time. Leah & Seth are at the beach when Bella is cliff diving, and are the ones to pull her out of the water, further cementing their bond. They take Bella home and are there when Alice shows up. Leah makes some sort of statement saying that they know that Bella & Edward aren’t mates, so they’re not willing to let Bella go alone anywhere near that Asshat without them. It’s all 3 of them who stop Edward with Alice showing up just a bit late, after all 4 of them are being summoned to the throne room to meet with the Queens (no kings). In the throne room, Edward is being his arrogant self, and is trying to manipulate the Queens into keeping Seth & Leah, but letting the rest of them go. THAT’S what causes Bella to shift the first time, trying to protect her Pack, thus imprinting on Dora, and Leah & Seth, also imprinting on the Witch Twins. Edward looses his shit when he hears Dora’s thoughts about finding her Mate, and tries attacking Dora, causing Bella to tear him apart, but not kill him. Alice is allowed “safe passage” to call her “family” and summon them to Italy. Where they are going to have a trial and see who knowingly supported the false Mate claim. (You of course decide who survives and who doesn’t) Dora takes a brief leave of absence from her royal duties in Italy, but does check in on all the American (north, central, and south) covens and nomads, to go back to Forks w/Bella so she can finish high school and Dora meet Charlie. Since the Cullens no longer need it, she sets up shop with the guards she brought with her, including the Witch Twins, since Leah & Seth want their mom Sue to meet their Imprints, in the Cullen House. Sam’s pack, looses their shit seeing “red eyed” vampires and try to attack them. This leads to not only the annihilation of the Pack, but the tribe, except for Sue because of her status w/ Seth & Leah. (You could do something more with this when they go back to Italy.) Dora meeting Charlie you could have some fun with. You could even have him accepting and approving of the relationship, not ever being told of the supernatural. The whole tribe annihilation, even though Charlie wants to investigate, he can’t since it’s on tribal lands. And of course when Uncle Sam steps in, it automatically becomes some sort of conspiracy cover up. With no one knowing Sue is the sole survivor. It can be during that time that the whole Victoria mess occurs. Possible fun twist, Bree sees and recognizes Charlie as her “vampire dad” and this leads to his turning, and eventual meeting of the Denali and Charlie being the sisters Mate. Any way, just some ideas.
M60476zeus
2023-12-07 06:23:51 +0000 UTCBella is on the reservation sometime after the cullens leave. Hanging with the pack (tho she only really gets along with Leah and Seth) Jacob and Paul gets into a fight shifting and Bella is injured in the process and needs blood fast. Jake feeling guilty donates his blood 🩸 thinking it will win him points with Bella once’s she gets better. Not knowing what’s to come after a few days bells is feeling better and goes home to find Alice in her house. Jake is mad because on the drive to Bella house he’s telling her how he saved her by giving her blood so she should thank him by going on a date with him. Which Bella refuses to do. Once home she leaves a fuming jack behind her in walks into the house. Alice drags her to save Eddie boy even though she doesn’t want to go. Once she stops Edward they’re brought to the throne room. Dora recognizes Bella as her mate. Bella for her part imprints on Dora but isn’t sure what happened just yet. Tho Bella does go back home to her dad to finish school. She start noticing the changes ( growth, muscles etc) in herself since the accident on the reservation. Victoria returns trying to kill her. The shifters and the cullens both working together to stop her but in the process both Jacob and Edward piss her off to the point she shifts. Being that Jacob is the one that gave the blood makes her a alpha in her own right and isn’t connected to the pack. Once they defeat Victoria and her army both groups focus on Bella but she only wants to deal with Leah, Seth, Jasper, Rosalie and Emmett. Eventually once Sam realizes Leah and Seth left the pack and joins the swan 🦢 pack he’s pissed. Edward and Jacob are also pissed Bella wants nothing to do with them and starts planning something. Dora sends Jane and Alec to check in on her mate and in the process they mate with Leah and Seth. That’s all I can think 💭 🤔 of for now.
Hazel
2023-12-06 23:27:55 +0000 UTCthe second one could have more joining the pack and the Cullen's siding with them in the hopes of killing of the Volturi and claiming Bella in order to create Wolf/Vampire Hybrids, which has them calling for witnesses like in cannon, but the Cullen's are actually in the wrong and the witnesses not realising that they are(Maggie would have to already be on the Volturi's side I guess or just not there).
Johnny Wilford
2023-12-06 17:25:32 +0000 UTCYou could have the accident Bella gets into being from her rejection of one of wolves most likely Jacob or Paul or just caused by a wolf, so she is wounded by them shifting like Emily was and the pack refuse to get her help because it might expose their secret and they hate that she was with Edward, Leah and Seth however refuse to just let Bella die and steal her and then using their blood give her a transfusion in the hopes that their blood would heal her, after it works Bella refuses to go back to the reservation and Leah, Seth and Bella bond after it all, eventually after cliff diving with Leah and Seth, Alice arrives thinking Bella killed herself and the going to Volterra plot happens. I'm not sure how you should continue maybe the Kings hate the idea of a Wolf being mated to Dora even though she isn't a Child of the Moon and it causes a rift between the Volturi Queens and the Kings eventually ending in a Civil War, and Bella forms a pack with Leah and Seth that could involve other shifters wanting to have rights that the kings denied them, or the Pack could sense Bella and try to use the the pack bond to force Bella back to La Push which causes Bella extreme pain and eventually the Volturi and Bella go to Forks to deal with everything, including maybe Charlie who was trying to pimp out his daughter to Jake and the Pack systematically abusing female shifters since the the pack started.
Johnny Wilford
2023-12-06 17:20:52 +0000 UTCYou could transfer Caius’ hate of “anything wolf” to Dora due to a werewolf killing Caius in the past; where He is Dora’s biological brother in your story. She overcomes her specific hate of Bella due to her mate status, and Seth and Leah due to a familial status. Their familial status can be verified by Marcus or Didime, whomever you decide has that gift. The rest of the pack however, can pound sand. Jacob may still have feelings for Bella which will trigger Dora’s mate claim and kill him off. You can use Sam’s previous relationship with Leah and their misuse of shared info in the pack link to off the rest as they’re hurting Bella’s family.
Eric Landauer
2023-12-06 16:31:31 +0000 UTCThere could be both thecute aspect being the relationship between bella and dora and the conflict could be the connection foced on bella to be a part of the pack and the wolves viewing her as an outsider and perversion of their precious wolf spirits in a similar way they don't think leah should of been a wolf so overall thier be the loving mate aspect but also the strained and forced connection to a pack that hates you
Marta Lis
2023-12-06 16:11:57 +0000 UTCI like ur idea. Also, would be nice to have Leah and Seth imprint on the witch twins, like that Bella would have a pack in Italy with her.
Griselle Acevedo
2023-12-06 16:09:04 +0000 UTCCUTE LOVE STORY
Laura
2023-12-06 16:09:04 +0000 UTCI say cute story. You could have it were Seth and Leah teamed up to call Charlie to force the transfusion of blood and it came from Paul. So the Queen would put the pack on a hit lit except Seth and Leah since they helped Bella. And with Bella's gift it allows her to not be forced with the alphas command and let's her shield Seth and Leah too.
Dani Tanselle
2023-12-06 16:01:25 +0000 UTCMaybe do kill them off but have Leah and Seth be part of Bella's pack. Then they can all be the castle puppies. I like it when the queens and Volturi are actually good.
Brittanie Wright
2023-12-06 15:51:58 +0000 UTCDefinitely a love story😏
Tianna Harper
2023-12-06 15:47:49 +0000 UTC
