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sunstone 9 update

apologies for the delay and the shorter update. turns out mental fatigue and creativity don't mix that well. been an overwhelming month and got into a but of a mental slump but i clawed my way out of it. now as for the shortness of the update (5 pages) i did make more, but then decided that narratively they messed up the flow of the whole thing and ruined the mood so i removed them. might use them down the line with a different dialogue tho, we'll see.

anyhow, i'm good now, and back on my bullshit ;) gonna be a wild month!

sunstone 9 update

Comments

Imo Alan is the perfect Dom. He's such an amazing character with all his quirks and flaws and geeky/cheeky personality. I love him so much.

Belbe

man was so taken aback he had to check the notes XD

stjepan sejic

The panel I keep coming back to is on page 14: Alan’s face when Ally tells him, β€œI am the customer at 1.” His aggravation is both so relatability palpable and perfectly hilarious. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Hal Bowman

Wow... really Alan explaining why he did what he did was... wonderful... giving space and curiosity at the same time

Leon Ramirez

I just love Alan in all his facets!

Brenda Lombardi

I love this, I love that you are also inclusive of all body types. Amazing story. I cannot wait to see Marion go from sub to dom.

Jason Plowman

Alan respecting boundaries and being sweet is why he's my favorite character 🧑

Ophelie B.

The gasp I let out when I read Marion’s narration!! I love her so much already and I was wondering if we were ever going to hear her voice early, and I’m so glad we are!! I can’t want for any more crumbs of her narration that we get before Jasper!! (Also please don’t worry, focus on taking care of yourself.)

LateTree123


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