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fine print update

pdf in the attachment, later tonight i'll upload separate pages for those that prefer that

fine print update

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This is fire πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ Almost missed it...

Leny

I loved it! I am so excited for the next!

Joshann (EBthePurple)

So after the 40 pages I guess I'm caught up on Fine Print?! [I'm awkwardly new here!] Guh, I canNOT wait for more!! How you capture moments and facial expression--stretching from cute, to hot, to HOLY CRAP scorching, to sweet and loving--gets me every page! Very excited for Mercy :)

I still get impressed by the way you make your characters' personalities feel so damn realistic... you are an amazing storyteller and I'm glad I started supporting you here! Can't wait to see the next part β™₯

She's awesome. And *so right* about kids! :)

Classical Salamander

Wow, Lauren just ... breathes. She’s so real inside. Please keep doling it out slowly. It’s like eating just the right amount of icing. Any chance we’ll see inside of Matthew’s thoughts eventually?

Nizing

Love it

Marsbar305

That really was wonderful.. Great storytelling.

Kaffeyette Lektor

Wonderful

Baxter Turnham

πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

Rachel Pickett

Talk about MELTING MY HEARY UGHHHH. My heart is literally soup πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

Aquamarine-Flower

I just caught up on Mercy, Death Vigil and Fine Print... That was a roller coaster of amazing. You're the only creator I know that can send me through so many stories at one time and I never feel fatigued. I'm left feeling a mix of satisfaction, energy and a thirst for more. Thank you.

Love how the story is developing

David Stanley

I’m already so upset that these two don’t work out. ;_; They’re so cute together!

Razzek

Totally agree! I could use it as the best wallpapper EVER! That sky is so fucking awesome!

Virc A.

I’m not that much into sunstones but I really like this one!

Oh, that's such a lovely relationship that's blossoming... *remembers where this ends up* Oh...this is going to be exciting to watch crash down around them XD

Evening

love it! beautifully tentative beginning of a doomed love story ;-)

Laura Van Aert

good god that was good!

Ross Kirkland

Every panel is so EXPRESSIVE!!!! ...unsure if you’re interested in proofreading but if so, on the last page there’s an ofen > often and comeuppins > comeuppance. Really looking forward to the next update! Even knowing this is all going to end in butterflies I’m still kinda rooting for young Lauren to pull this off!

Stephanie Graf

I have been amazed with your art for a while now, but the expressions you manage to get out of Lauren are simply wonderful. You have packed so much emotion into a quirky smile. I can’t wait to see this story roll out.

Mike Smith

You are one hell of a story teller - I'm usually one to rush through stuff and just skim but for some reason your work stops me and find myself enjoying every line and movement - gah - amazing work as always - and looking forward to the next post (as always)

Lance worman

Omg you're right 🀣

Heletilla

Holy shit Sjtepan! The last page is incredible!

Heletilla

Love the update! I think you may have forgotten to draw their feet on p.37 though? :)

Oh man... I can get why she went for a more desperate route after their relationship ended :< Poor Lauren :<

Belbe


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