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kawacy
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Boyfriend

Serious request: please help fix my tragic Engrish, both grammar and vocab before they make it to the final piece. πŸ˜‚

Boyfriend

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Seems like you already got a couple of suggestions, so I won't bother you with more. I'll be happy to help with any english or grammar issues you may have. Just send me a message. Anything to keep these beautiful comics coming <3

rinibeeny

Tamii aww glad you like it πŸ₯ΊπŸ’• I'll try to convert the stories into comics as much as i can for you and for myself because i love to relive their moments over and over again. Long story short, he simply just took care of her when her parents got divorced and she was left alone. At that time she was still very young :) But as time went by, she grew up, and both started to fall for each other romantically. Many romantic events in the process of them falling for each other happened since I was playing it in a very very slow mode. And that's why I made the guilty pleasure doodles because I wanted to save and remember all of their precious moments. I would really love to hear your stories too! You can share me on twitter or anywhere anytime you want~ That is so beautifulll and how crazy is that I was planning to name my baby sims Luna (if i ever have one) since my character's name in my webcomic was Runa which was japanese derived from Luna. Wish her the full happiness in the world!! even sims deserve a good life πŸ˜†πŸ’– Don't worry, please don't feel obligated to help me! I was just asking for everyone's opinions since i know my english sucks ball Dx your english is good tho! Thank you Tamii! I will do my best for the next oneπŸ’ͺ

Kawacy

Omg chihaya-Senpai this is so cute πŸ˜±πŸ’•πŸ’•, I am dying I never get bored of your comics it’s really made my day you know what! I really want to know the story how they met I think it’s a really cute story! He took a good care of her he is so sweet πŸ₯ΊπŸ’—πŸ’— in my game I really enjoy going in a lot of dates with him. He is really the best sims ever πŸ₯ΊπŸ’•πŸ’• My mind can’t stop making stories. And yes just as you said he is really a good daddy god he is so sweet with his little girl and she really looks like him I named her Luna (moon) a little vampire girl was born in the full moon πŸŒ•πŸ’•. And I really want to help you with grammar but English is not my first language. But if you want any help with anything else I will always be here for you πŸ’•πŸ’• also can’t wait for your next one! πŸ₯ΊπŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

Tammy Chan

Well then I'm even happier now to see this scene hit home to someone or just can be a little bit accurate to real life relationships πŸ₯ΊπŸ’– Thank you for sharing your story!! Makes me wanna find love and experience all these _(:3γ€βˆ )_ lmao It's alright, you don't have to be a native to point out my mistakes or just give suggestions to my catastrophic English ;v; also thank you for liking the wip so far! I will do my best to color this!

Kawacy

This is kinda funny since my ex boyfriend and I started dating like this more or less HAHAHA Like .. "Wait ... Are we dating? " and was so confused 'till he confess xDD Anyway I agree with comments above about the english grammar and that :3 I'm spanish tho HAHAHA Great job as always Kawa β™₯

Please don't feel sorry for thatπŸ₯ΊπŸ™ I'm already very grateful you're here supporting me! Obviously in this one, they're not yet dating. These comic pages won't be in chronological order because my inspiration always comes up so randomly _(:3γ€βˆ )_ so it's impossible to do the scenes with time order... hope it won't be a problem >.< Thank you so much for your suggestion!! I will definitely review all the dialogues once again to make sure the mistakes don't make it to the final piece!!! :3c I'm so blessed to have you and everyone here! I will do my best to color this one!πŸ’ͺπŸ’–

Kawacy

Ahhh sorry for not keeping up with the posts! I'm back though uwu Are they dating at this point or not yet? It seems like they aren't based on her reaction, but I'm not sure about it due to his. By the way, your English is good. You're doing really well, really! It seems like someone already suggested the bottom left, so I have something for the bottom right. "Is this really a date? It's different from what I imagined before."

I'm actually happy to have my guilty pleasure in the form of comic pages. This way I can relive my favorite moments over and over again. And it's extra happiness for me if you like them! πŸ˜­πŸ’–

Kawacy

Thankyou thankyou thank youuu >,< I was so sure I messed up that part how can I thank you?

Kawacy

Aaaa i love these comic series u do 😁😊. Keep up the great work

How about this? It's for the bottom left corner. "We've been together for so long. Ever since we were young, he's taken care of me like a big brother."

Owlet

Me too, but just so I can eat all of them πŸ˜‚ extra food for me.

Kawacy

If people are giving out free food to β€œboyfriends”, maybe it’s time I find one too lol


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