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How would you rate "Poster Girl Chapter 1"?

 I'm curious to see how you reacted to the opening chapter of Poster Girl.

Note: Moving forward, I'll do these ratings polls on a ^very* rarely basis, mostly when I feel I've struck gold in regards to content or am onto something. It goes without saying I feel that way about Poster Girl, but what about you?

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Grammatically and from a literary aspect, it was top notch. Descriptions of her muscles and various flexing and feats was also good. It was the lack of any growth or sexy-funtimes that made me rate it lower. This idea has merit, but it was a slow start. That being said, I think it was also a start that was done at the right pace for the given story, if that makes sense.

Malhavoc


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