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Song Demo: "Trash Together"

Hey team,

This is one of the songs I've been working on recently. It will have a lot more instruments etc in the end, but I'd like your feedback on melodies, singing & lyrics.

You may notice I've changed my pronunciation - it's been a project I've been working on over the last six months when practicing, and I really like it.

As always with demos, please don't share with people outside the team. This is for our group only :D

Direct link: https://soundcloud.com/roomieofficial/trash-together-demo-feb-21-2019/s-Hh8OD

Roomie

Song Demo: "Trash Together"

Comments

Joel, so very sweet innocent, really lovely. Like only the guitar accompaniment, and a single echo layer in the song. Thank you ✌️✌️✌️❤️❤️❤️😂😂😂

Gayle

This song would be even better if you started soft and went into crescendo to build the dynamics. It would make it more interesting to hear the variation. Just my opinion. It's still catchy as is. I just think if you started of the versus kind of quiet and really build up to the chorus it would have a super dope effect.

Spirituality of Science

I really love this song and I hope someday you will be able to finish it.

Holly DeAugustino

This is one of my favourite songs out of all of them. After watching your vids you inspired me to write my songs, even though they were not very good. One of them used to be on my account but I get rid of it bc it was super bad like there was no music or anything.

Isabella Weekes

Wow! It's really weird "talking" with someone you've been watching for years. I will be on the lookout :)

Lexx

Thanks! This one is in a grey area right now, it's unclear if I'll go ahead with it but I really like it. I'll let you know

Joel Berghult

I hope you're still working on this and are planning to release it, I really like it, and it would be nice to be able to listen to it on Spotify.

Lexx

I wish there was a download because I love this song

orson smith

Hey, as long as you’re enjoying it, than keep at it! Btw, would you ever do a song in Swedish?

Vikki

Thanks Serpas! There's not a lot of effects on here since it's a demo, it's compression & EQ mostly

Joel Berghult

Glad you like it Viktorija! Yeah it's definitely different, comes across as a bit cooler and smoother in my book which I'm really enjoying :)

Joel Berghult

I'm so excited I love your music roomie 🥰, btw what effects you use on your voice sounds different but I like it

Serpas

I like the direction this song is going, I’m excited to hear the finished project. The pronunciation of some words caught be off guard, not in a bad way tho. It’s different and I like it.

Vikki

Thanks angela :)

Joel Berghult

I think it’s a great song, really love it :)

Angela

That's awesome :) Thanks for being part of the creation of it! :)

Joel Berghult

Love the tempo of the beat of the song and the lyrics of the song goes well with the effects 10/10 made me cry while listening to it

sebastion707


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