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Book Five, Chapter 72

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~Kimberly~

"I'm getting all kinds of footage," Riley said as we walked back up through the basement path that would lead us back into Witherhold Manor. "There are so many hikers, campers, and people staying at cabins along the river. Carousel's been taking footage of them all day, but I think some of them are werewolves. I don't know which ones, though. I can see the way it focuses the camera on some of them, but I'm not sure exactly what the language of film is trying to convey here. Are all of these people werewolves?"

"What exactly are you seeing?" Antoine asked. He could be so frustrated when Riley didn't describe what his insight tropes had told him.

Antoine wished he was Savvy-based; it’s how he wanted to be seen. He was good at sports, but he seemed to resent that even before we came to Carousel. That was a part of himself he had always kept from me, no matter how hard I tried to get him to open up.

I knew he was entitled to his secrets, but I couldn’t help but run face-first into the barrier he put up around his heart every time I almost got him to talk.

"Just nature photography mostly," Riley replied, "but whenever I see a group of people, sometimes the camera will look at them from a certain angle that in movies means they’re evil—exaggerating the size of their head, the sharpness of their features, catching them in shadows. That’s how you know someone’s bad before you know they’re bad."

"So you're saying we may be surrounded by hundreds of werewolves? We're going to get our butts kicked?" Antoine asked.

"Or chewed," Riley said. "I'm not getting as much footage as I'd like, which should theoretically mean that we have a high-Savvy enemy... but that doesn't sound right at all. Unless Kirst’s Savvy is what I'm fighting against."

Egan Kirst was a perfectly charming and polite sociopath, and yet, when I saw the way he looked at his son, I could see he was truly vulnerable. Riley and Antoine didn’t trust him—they thought he was going to backstab us—but I thought he was telling the truth, not just in the way an NPC is when following a script. I believed that the real man beneath it all felt something intensely during that scene, and that might have been the only true thing he said to us: that he loved his son.

That didn’t make sense because his son was being played by someone else, but I knew in my heart that Egan Kirst did love someone. I would bet money that he lost them too.

"Are you getting locations with this data?" Andrew asked. Andrew was a very smart guy, and he was not hiding his jealousy of Riley's insight tropes very well. Even though Andrew was high-Savvy, his tropes were mostly centered around healing, and he wasn't great at finding out information unless he was cutting open a dead body.

"Vaguely," Riley said. "They’re all situated along the river, and there have been a lot of shots following the river all the way up toward the property the Manor is on. Wait a second…"

"What is it?" Antoine asked.

"I got footage of the werewolves mauling Logan and Avery. It’s cut up and pasted together, but I think it's actual footage."

"They're using the footage of when we trespassed onto the monster lair?" Andrew asked.

"That's my best guess," Riley said. "Just from the way they shot it, it almost feels like they didn’t know how it was going to be used in the final film."

As we made our way up into the Manor, we were greeted by Kirst’s butler, who insisted on leading us outside.

"Wait, you're not putting us outside when we know there are werewolves around, are you?" I asked the butler.

"I don't think you have anything to fear here, my darling," he said in reply.

We were Off-Screen, and yet this guy kept his snarky, malevolent gaze and mannerisms. He wasn't playing a role—that was just him.

I looked at the others, and while they seemed to share some level of my hesitation, we had all learned that when an NPC leads you somewhere so blatantly, you’re just supposed to follow. In some storylines, it felt like I was being led around by a tour guide.

When we did Ranger Danger, my sorority sisters were literally yanking me by the arm, taking me from place to place so I could talk to all the different people and so that the jocks could all flirt with me.

The butler continued leading us out of the Manor and back onto the property where I could see some type of... well, it wasn't exactly a castle, but there were lots of stone structures and walls.

On-Screen.

"What is that?" I asked. Carousel had brought us On-Screen just as I was thinking about asking, as if it knew what I was going to say.

"That, my dear, is the palisade—the Fort. Or at least, it was once."

What I saw in front of me was a network of tall stone walls, many of them crumbling but still functional.

"That's a death trap," Antoine said. "A werewolf could clear those walls without even thinking about it."

The butler smiled his devious little smile and said, "I think we’re counting on that."

"You're planning a trap?" Andrew said.

"Werewolves are mindless creatures," the butler said. "Many of the resources we've found confirmed that."

"That's a bad bet," Hawk said. He was mostly quiet. I didn’t know if he wasn’t commenting on our discussions because he couldn’t as a Paragon or because that was just his nature, but he was one of those men that you could just see the intelligence in his eyes. He understood what we were talking about, whether he spoke about it or not.

I saw passion there too, long dead.

"Oh?" the butler asked. "Then, I suppose you will have no difficulty imparting your wisdom to the captain."

"Imparting wisdom is always the hard part," Hawk said. "The werewolves around Carousel are not stupid like many of the wolves in other parts of the world. Here, they’re as smart as you are—once they mature a bit."

"Perhaps you can design," he said, pausing as the sound of a wolf could be heard in the distance, "a better trap then. Go straight onto the palisade wall; there’s an entrance. You’ll be able to see it when you get closer. I should not have to tell you that these men know you have been infected, and each one of them is ready to take your head off if you cause problems."

"If the legends are true," Riley said, "I imagine we won’t be the only infected ones soon enough. Something tells me you picked a really bad week to try to antagonize the wolves."

"What are you, some sort of psychic now? I didn’t remember reading that in your dossier," the butler said.

"No," Riley said, "that’s my grandmother—that’s the psychic. Me? I just have gut instinct. Lots of would-be hunters think it’s a werewolf’s ferocity that kills, but that’s not it. It’s their playfulness."

For the first time, the butler seemed to have been tripped up by something one of us said.

Antoine leaned over to the butler and said, "They’re thrill-seekers, werewolves, and my money says they already know we’re here. In fact, my money says they’ve already walked amongst us, watching us. I hope you kept track of the meatheads."

The butler didn’t have much to say to that. He just did a strange little bow, turned tail, and walked back toward the Manor.

Off-Screen.

Before we got to the palisade, I decided to tell them about my backstory. I told them about the woman who was my friend, and after rereading the article on the attack I’d been given, I realized that she had also been a camp counselor.

"If she’s alive, that means she was turned," Michael said.

I though so too.

"You’ll have to play that up," Riley said. "Really focus on that relationship. Should take up screen time and make a fine subplot."

I nodded.

I didn’t have a lot of information on Sarah, so I was probably going to have to make things up, but that was okay. She would go along with pretty much anything I said and would probably even add to it.

Odds were, if we went down that path, she would be the one to kill me.

Once we found the entrance to the Fort, hidden in the stone and not easily visible from afar, we followed a path of overgrown grass and dead leaves that had recently been trampled on.

Inside the Fort, a large courtyard was transformed into a battle station. Two dozen armed mercenaries, many firearms, and explosives were set up. In the corner, a blacksmith appeared to be creating silver bullets en masse.

"Cannon fodder," Michael said.

"Dead meat," Riley agreed.

"Lila's not here," Andrew said. "I haven’t seen a trace of her yet. It’s always difficult with her being a wallflower and all. Did you see her while watching the dailies?" he asked Riley.

Riley shook his head. "She might have been there, but there were so many different people I didn’t notice her. She might not have ever appeared On-Screen yet."

"It’s a pity," Andrew said.

Andrew, like Cassie, had the ability to detect the health status of all of his teammates from anywhere, but he had to actually interact in some way with them in the story. He hadn’t done that yet with Lila. Was he afraid that she had run away or that she was up to something? I didn’t know, but I could tell that some of us were thinking it.

"All right," Antoine said. "Spread out. See if you can get any information. I need to find this captain person and have a talk."

"Get a lay of the land as best you can. Just do some exploring," Hawk said, speaking for the first time Off-Screen. "I doubt the wolves are going to come out tonight. It's too overcast—they get lethargic without the moon, even with this pitiful little sliver shining through."

He was looking up at the sky, and while the moon was not visible, there was a glow through the clouds—just enough to tell where the moon was, but not enough to make it out completely.

So Hawk could speak to us—just not in a meta way.

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"Now, men, listen up! This here is Antoine Stone. He's a third-generation werewolf killer, and he seems to think he knows something we don't. And as I don't want to be werewolf shit in the morning, I say we give him a listen."

The man's name was Captain Neil Tiber. He was a grizzled military type. Riley had called him a direct stereotype, and I supposed he was, but I thought he had a sense of humor.

Antoine stood next to the captain in front of 26 mercenaries, most of whom were at least as tall as Antoine and twice as muscular.

"We have a bit of an emergency here," Antoine said. "I've been looking around at your firearms, and you've got them all wrong."

"Wolf comes to me, I'll blow his head off," one of the men said with an accent I couldn't place.

That got chuckles out of the rest of the men.

I stood in the back and watched. All I had managed to accomplish was finding a change of clothes so that I didn't have to wear a dress everywhere I went. I also picked up a gun.

"That's the exact problem," Antoine said. "Most of the firearms I see around here are too strong."

The laughter didn't stop; it just changed from mocking to curious.

"The goal is to put the silver bullet into the wolf, not to shoot through it. The silver has to stay in the body until morning light," Antoine said. "If your shot is a through-and-through, that wolf gets right back up 30 minutes later. I recommend handguns for close combat and silver bird shot to keep them sweet. Shoot once to kill, shoot again to make sure they stay dead."

The men weren't laughing anymore.

"They'll get right back up if I shoot 'em in the head?" the first soldier asked again.

Antoine started to answer, but then Hawk took over.

"They can survive anything, assuming the silver slug doesn't stay in their corpse. Headshot? They'll get up eventually. Shot to the heart takes a little longer. But worse than that, they're gonna play dead and make you think you got 'em. And if you did get 'em, one of their friends—one of the more mature ones, the self-aware ones—they'll come over and dig that silver out. We are up against an enemy that knows its weaknesses. This isn't a big game hunt; this is a war."

"How are we supposed to know these things are dead if what you say is true?" the captain asked.

"Shoot 'em dead, then shoot 'em with silver birdshot like the young gun said. That’ll work. What I like to do is plant this sucker in their heart, make sure they stay down 'til morning," Hawk said, producing a large hunting knife made entirely of silver.

From there on, I half-listened to the conversation between the soldiers, Antoine, and Hawk. Something else had caught my attention—a blacksmith. She was a woman, easily in her 60s, wearing a mask to save herself from the silver fumes.

On the red wallpaper, her name was Hetty Morgan.

I'm not sure what drew me to her. Maybe it was the calluses on her fingers I noticed when she took off one of her big blacksmith gloves or the way she kept glancing up at Antoine as if she wasn't surprised at all at the things she was hearing, unlike the soldiers.

I approached her, but before I could ask her anything, she walked to the back of her little forge setup and tinkered with something I couldn't see, though I suspected it was just a piece of wood.

Soon, I understood what was happening—Antoine and the others were On-Screen, and this interaction I was about to have needed to be On-Screen. And yet, Carousel stuck to its rule that only one thing was On-Screen at a time.

Sure enough, when Antoine went Off-Screen and the soldiers disbanded, the silversmith gracefully walked back over to her workbench and began gathering little bits of silver into a thick cup made of something that could be put into the furnace. A crucible, I thought it was called.

On-Screen.

"Do you think we have a chance?" I asked, trying to play it cool, like Anna would have.

The woman looked up at me, wiped the sweat off her brow, and said, "This is a foolish thing to do."

"Mr. Kirst is desperate," I said.

"Most fools are, eventually," she answered as she picked the cup up and moved it over into the furnace.

"Still, we have to try."

"Do we have to try?" Hetty asked. "I say you either kill a werewolf or you set it free. The wolves around Carousel are peaceful—for wolves. They only kill once in a blue moon, and I'm old enough to remember it could be much worse. Wolves without a pack ain't much better than wild things. This thing we're doing—even if we succeed—a lot of people in Carousel are going to die for it."

She had clearly been thinking about this for a while.

"Killing the pack leader," I said. "Do you think that's a mistake?"

"I do," Hetty said. "You kill her, and all these wolves won't be no better than any of the others. She keeps 'em in line."

"She?" I asked. "The pack leader is a female—a woman?"

"A she-wolf," Hetty said. "You don't think a man could do that job, do you? Always been a woman since I was a child. Before my mother was a child, she roamed these hills and gathered her pack, and there was peace. But the wolves ain't always so peaceful, and when she ain't around to stop it, some of her little boys go a bit crazy. They go killing just to kill, just to eat."

"And she doesn't have them do that?" I asked.

"Not her," Hetty said. "You can hear it in her howl. She's the most lovesick wolf you ever heard. She's looking for love, not blood, but she ain't found it yet."

"I was attacked not far from here. My friends were killed," I said. "I finally got the courage to come back here."

"I know who you are, girly," Hetty said. “And you should never have come back here.”

Chills went down my spine as the wind picked right when she said that.

"Why?" I asked.

"The wolves never forget a scent," she said.

Lovely.

"You seem to know a lot about this," I said.

"I only know what I've been told."

"What can you tell me about the Manor house? How does it fit into the legend?" I asked.

"Well, everything's got to start somewhere," she said. "Everything's gotta end somewhere too."

"You're saying the werewolf curse actually did start here, just like they’re saying?" I asked.

Hetty pulled the crucible from the fire and poured the silver down into a metal box where it would form into bullets.

"You'll have to ask the she-wolf about that. She was here when it happened. She's been looking for love ever since."

I didn’t know where this was going, but it sounded important.

"My colleague Riley Lawrence over there says that all werewolves are in love."

"Oh, yes," the woman said. "Ever since the first."

Off-Screen.

We continued exploring, and while we didn't find a whole lot inside the palisade walls, we did get a good understanding of their layout in case we were suicidal enough to actually have a fight out under the stars.

We were given sleeping quarters in a chamber underneath the palisade, and the first night drifted away peacefully. First Blood was still long enough away that we could feel safe.

All werewolves were in love, I thought to myself as I lay on my cot. I looked across the room to where Antoine was sleeping.

Everything was so much better when you were in love. Even a place like Carousel couldn't break you if you could be with someone who cared about you above all else.

So, Carousel told stories about love, huh? Did that mean love still had power here?

I drifted off to sleep, only waking once to what I thought was the sound of a wolf howling—but it was just the wind.

 

 

Comments

Interesting I thought different. Felt there was a drop in their efficiency without Camden being a scholar. And then I felt Riley try to step up to fill the void with a certain degree of success but not perfectly

Austin Byrd

It also felt to me like he was doing that here

Cat Cat

I’m enjoying the POV switch. The only issue I’ve had was thinking Kimberly’s chapter should have been before or integrated so that it didn’t go back after they get to their destination.

Eloren Koori

I think it would have worked best without a Riley chapter at all. To have Kimberly aw POV all the way

Slightly Morbid

Yes! Were staying with Kimberly! I've said this before, but out of all of the characters, I feel she has grown the most. In the beginning the team really had to babysit her, but now she has shown herself to be a truly reliable teammate.

Bakerdea

I think both Kimberly chapters worked well. The protagonist changes do a lot to flesh out characters

Steven Frazier

It's kind of funny because I feel like Riley does Camden's job better than Camden ever did

GoldenAge

For them, it just means they are given their own "protagonist" plot, and the story follows them as they explore it (in a story like this, their plots will not be super complicated as the main plot is pretty straightforward). The main character generally experiences the story converging on them so they can be the focus. In this story, that will happen to all of them (with it happening to Kimberly more than the others). We'll see how that turns out.

Lost Rambler

I dig the concept, I appreciate the enemy trope causing it, I’m curious if there’s going to be some meta explanation for how the characters experience that trope, or if it’s really just us in the audience that do.

Josh Pfleeger

I love seeing the story from others pov especially Kimberly or Antoine. Since although they fit certain stereotypes as this chapter points out they both want to be more like someone else around them. It's interesting hearing that ppl are jealous of Riley given that he's said himself to wish to be more like Camden and Antoine. To be honest when I first started this I had thought Kimberly would be closer to Riley since they both bare the burden of usual first deaths

Jordan Lopez

I see. I'll reserve judgement then until the Storyline is completed since it might be the episodic nature of patreon uploads that's throwing me off. Thanks for responding.

Scarred Ragdoll

Successful or not, that is the gimmick of this storyline.

Lost Rambler

I hesitate to mention this lest I come off as mean, but this chapter also comes off as somewhat jarring? It's kinda like we started the storyline with Rilley as the protagonist, and two chapters in we started doing a reboot of the story based on Kimberly? This is also based on the previous chapters being present though. Hope I caused no offence, just trying to provide some feedback.

Scarred Ragdoll

“He would be so frustrated when Riley didn't describe what his insight tropes had told him.” Did you mean could instead of would? Because it sounds a bit off as written, like she’s saying he will be frustrated in the future

Trent Cannon

Honestly the last line might just be carousel fucking with them

The Dangerous Dino

Really enjoying this shift in perspective. Riley understands movies and sees everything through that lens (stereotypes, tropes, filming techniques, foreshadowing), whereas Kimberly understands people, and has a better understanding of both the people inside the NPCs as well as her fellow players. I also really like the way she’s playing basically a former Final Girl; it makes sense that a Celebrity wouldn’t be pigeon-holed into only ever being Eye Candy, and could essentially be cast in any leading role.

Damian Karis

Hmm... why do I suspect those last few lines are a subtle hint that she's one of the ones that will turn if they don't win?

David Giles

I think having a full shift to Kimberley's perspective makes the previous chapter fit in better, as most of us likely thought it was just a temporary change and we'd be going straight back to Riley thus making that pacing issue.

DeadicatedReader


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