Sam

Wait...

Added 2021-07-11 15:22:07 +0000 UTC

A little peak at the script! The better, less hot garbagé script!

It's been a journey. I needed to step away from it for a bit so I could come back with fresh eyes to fix some things readers pointed out and things I myself noticed and wanted to change.

Then I needed to add Damián into the script and also redo Azriel's intro, as I need everything in the demo to stay in TC for my own future sanity. And I wanted to retype it all to hopefully catch more oopsies. And it's a good idea to do at least one retype of a draft. Since you have to type everything out again, you really think about your word choice. Really, really think about them.

I also shifted the setting to a... pseudo 90's vibe, so I had to remove any modern references. It's an alternate timeline 90's where LGBTQ+ people have rights, basically.

Writing's a slow process. Some days I can bust out 2000 words. Other days I can only manage 200 or none at all.

Good news though! I'm done with this newest version of the demo script! And it's 3000 words shorter!

I'll give it one more good sit, then wrangle some poor unfortunate souls to beta read/edit for me.