*New story* Feliformia - Chapter 9 - The Texture Of Our Skin
Added 2020-04-17 12:37:19 +0000 UTCStory Index and previous chapters
I read this 18000 words story one final time this morning, and I'm really happy with the quality. I think I'm getting better at it. :)
As for the story ... I will let it speak for itself. I hope you'll find it Felisfying. :) (oh ... see what I just did there?)
Enjoy!
TS
ps: For those who knew I got sick a while ago, I'm 100% back to health. I will probably never know if it was Covid-19 or not, but all is good now even though it was a bit scary. Please stay safe everyone.
Comments
Aww. Thanks and welcome. I saw you just joined. I hope you'll like whats coming down the pipe. :)
2020-06-04 22:04:03 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed all parts of this story. You are very creative. I am enjoying all your stories
2020-06-04 21:23:33 +0000 UTCCareful what you wish for. ;)
2020-04-18 16:00:03 +0000 UTCThanks for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed yourself. It did take a lot of time indeed. I read it so many times before publishing it. Then I took a few days break and read it one last time before clicking submit. It was one of the first times when I told myself: "Hey ... this is really good." More and more, I'm convinced that the longer the story is, the better I am at writing. I'm just not designed to write short stories, I think.
2020-04-18 15:58:27 +0000 UTCThough to be fair this story reminds me of a human interest story I saw on the telly as a kid. Where the wife of an avid stampcollector answered that she didn't blame her husband as it clearly was his hobby that was controlling him and not the other way around. I particularly love the way you depicted Mark's opening mindset. I think everybody, esp in this time, has had moments that felt exactly like that. The way the ladies subsequently tackle that issue is wonderfully creative. Thanks for taking so much time crafting this work. It shows and I will gladly re-read it the coming days
Leon
2020-04-18 14:44:55 +0000 UTCI would like to formally object to Mark's completely inappropriate behavior. While I understand Bio-diversity in captivity is of the utmost importance this behavior simply cannot be condoned. Keeping all three types of cat-girls under one roof in this time of scarcity and crisis is simply immoral. He should share at least one of them with me!!!
Leon
2020-04-18 14:37:12 +0000 UTC