Life(guard) Lessons: Part III
Added 2020-10-30 13:39:56 +0000 UTCGood morning Patrons!
Attached, please find part III of "Life(guard) Lessons," the spiritual successor to my original foray into weight-gain fiction twenty-five years ago, “The Lesson.” If you haven't already, you can read part I, and the impetus behind the tale, here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/life-guard-42400373
My intention was for this to be the final chapter, but I kept going back and forth on whether or not to add a particular scene and, once I did, it fleshed-out to the point of needing a separate finale. I hope you don't mind!
Maverick
PS: Upon the story's conclusion next week, I will post it in its entirety in one PDF.
Comments
Thanks (as always!) for the thoughtful and encouraging feedback, Matt! Maverick and I both appreciate it. Speaking for myself, regarding the encounter towards the end of this installment I couldn't help noticing some mild allusions to a similar tense confrontation between the characters Kara and Alissa in my own story, "The Slowest Champion: Revisited." I like to imagine it may have had some minor influence. ; ) -Riptoryx
Maverick and Riptoryx
2020-11-01 00:18:19 +0000 UTCSuperbly written. You have an outstanding talent for dialogue and descriptions, likewise I admire how you can pen a dramatic scene in a smooth style.
Matt L.
2020-10-31 08:56:37 +0000 UTC
