Chapter 10
Added 2022-10-01 01:14:04 +0000 UTCSilence filled the room.
Drea
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I cancelled my subscription. To me, Avid is a scam artist milking a good story premise for money by delivering the minimum quality and content to keep the gravy flowing…
Fredly
2023-01-25 15:16:13 +0000 UTCis chapter 11 the last chapter of this series
mark
2022-12-31 05:00:36 +0000 UTCHe should be telling us on here.
Mouse
2022-12-05 07:28:48 +0000 UTCIs anyone else seeing his deadlines as a con game? Once the 1st of the month is here and the money is paid…..promise it is coming on the last day of the month and don’t deliver. Rinse and repeat!
Scotchman
2022-12-01 03:50:48 +0000 UTCThat today Ch. 11 will be posted… but we will see
Martin G
2022-11-30 18:16:40 +0000 UTCWhat is posted on Discord?
Praycir
2022-11-29 21:10:50 +0000 UTCI wish Avid would acknowledge us at least. Not everyone wants to be on Discord considering we are paying an arm and a leg for this. And I know he could reduce this tier if he wanted to. He's posted recently on Literotica so everything is ok.
Mouse
2022-11-26 13:09:43 +0000 UTChope everything is ok
inaire
2022-11-21 04:45:27 +0000 UTChope you're alright, when you decide to get back to us, I will get back to you
robert
2022-11-20 15:28:19 +0000 UTCCh 11?
Nic
2022-11-20 07:05:58 +0000 UTCwow! amazing re-write!
robert
2022-11-01 03:23:01 +0000 UTCCh.10 just updated?
Alex
2022-10-31 23:56:31 +0000 UTCAre we getting Chapter 11 in October?
niffygriffy
2022-10-28 11:16:01 +0000 UTCReally love this entire series. It has been a huge fantasy of mine for a long time. My wife and I have done some Roleplay about things just like it. Please keep up the great work. I love a good slow build. Also really really like that the husband had to wear a condom now.
Wess
2022-10-23 18:58:44 +0000 UTCI really liked David story and it did turn out pretty well, Bill will definitely love to watch the outcome of it! Jack can be pissed but I dont see him kick his ass … I would prefer to see Jack get physical revenge Amber, not David. As for Stacey I like her role more and more. I think she has a thing for Amber and you should edit that she watch Amber ass when she climb the stairs with David.
SweetBubbleBe
2022-10-16 03:23:32 +0000 UTCI want to hear that story Wdude! You on the discord?
Larry
2022-10-15 16:32:42 +0000 UTCI’m wondering how bill will like the David story
Wdude2069
2022-10-14 19:06:12 +0000 UTCI am also in the don’t like David camp. He is just too much of an asshole. Unless you make Amber to simply want to be as much of a slut as is possible it doesn’t really make a lot of sense. I also tend not to Like the whole everyone Has a bigger cock than the husband thing. I diverge though in thinking that Bill should be the one to get rid of David. Amber could fuck him while Bill records him making some pretty damning statements then gets him to quit.
Praycir
2022-10-11 17:46:53 +0000 UTCAgree with what you say about David's asshole. But I think that when a story where a wife no longer enjoys having sex with her husband and only with her bull is when she starts to go wrong. If, on the other hand, encounIf instead Amber and Bill encounters with Jack make them have more sex and be more passionate between them and Amber continues to enjoy sex with Bill then they are on the right track.
Arthas19
2022-10-09 04:54:05 +0000 UTCWell about this chapter 10, the first part in the car was great. I would dare to say that it was the best scene in history so far, it was very hot. Maybe only surpassed by chapter 4. The only but is that Jack is neglecting Amber's breasts. And it was a great touch that Jack realized that Amber was able to end everything because he drugged Bill. It was also exciting that Amber in her mind called Jack her bull. The last part instead disgusted me and lowered my mood. The best thing about that part was Jack's jealousy at seeing Amber with a man other than Bill. It would have been great if Amber had also had some jealousy seeing Jack with Stacey, not the romantic jealousy kind but the female jealousy kind of seeing another female with her alpha male. I really wanted Jack to find them and smash David's face. And for Jack to be the one to punish Amber for being so naughty. It felt bad too that Amber was so quick to say the words "daddy" and "baby" to David. I didn't think Amber would go down so easily in the face of David's threat. She was very gullible. But I thought it was smart about the recording and her making him say the blackmail line. I really thought that David would have a small cock and Amber would be the one to humiliate him. I hope Amber is smart and she edits that video as quickly as possible to make it look like David is threatening her. And since David is an idiot who doesn't think things through he might try something with Amber again and since she loses her temper quickly, the only one who would have the courage to stop David and save her from him is Jack. David is an asshole who is going to fuck up Amber and Bill's lives if they don't get him out of their lives fast. He will also ruin Bill's work and that of his classmates if he doesn't disappear. I fully support MLJ's comment. I think it would be a good way for Jack to get rid of David. And it would also be a good deed for Jack to do for his neighbors.
Arthas19
2022-10-09 04:36:46 +0000 UTCI hated part as much as the part where Bill got drugged. The David character is a douchebag and apparently Amber is a moron. I really liked this story, but this part killed it for me
Hunter Hoffman
2022-10-08 05:28:23 +0000 UTCWow I can’t wait to find out how he steals her for a whole week. That’s so hot. An older rich dude stole my wife for 4 days once irl
Wdude2069
2022-10-08 00:20:20 +0000 UTCI'm late to this party, but I love the story and this instalment. I especially love the slow-burn of Jack's corrupting Amber, and Bill's descent into being cuckolded. The psychological aspects are beautifully developed: notice how Jack works on Amber to get her to insult her husband -- subconsciously reducing him in her eyes, and increasing his own status. The condoms, it's now revealed aren't just another element of humiliation, but make Amber crave Jack more. And yet Amber's love for Bill is always apparent, even as she does things which would appear to be very mean to any outside observer. That I think is the best aspect of the story, the way it can blend a love story with increasingly extreme cuckolding. Something tells me that the condoms aren't going away after the anniversary. Either Bill will get Amber bare once, or maybe not even that. Amber is getting more and more turned on by relegating her husband to condoms, so it would be easy to see her deciding to extend Bill's denial. And Jack almost certainly has a trick up his sleeve. Bill seems to be getting aroused more and more quickly, so he might well blow his load before he even gets a chance to take Amber without a condom, which in turn might make Amber annoyed enough to keep him in condoms. Who knows; but I'd be willing to bet that Bill's privileges are more likely to go down than up. While I love seeing Jack have his way with Amber and subjugate Bill, I hate David. I like the role that he's played in the story so far, but I really don't want him to get any more. I hope he just gets his comeuppance.
RobL
2022-10-05 19:58:04 +0000 UTCA week when Jack will have Amber, and she probably will be submissive letting Jack to be her master. Probably something like that
Roxy
2022-10-02 20:24:13 +0000 UTCWhat does week of submission mean?
Wdude2069
2022-10-02 16:23:33 +0000 UTCAnniversary will be ch 12...ch 11 is the week of submission
Roxy
2022-10-02 15:22:43 +0000 UTCI really loved the follow up on ch9. Personally my only note is I would have rather wanted to read more about amber sucking David off and less about Jack and ambers car quickie. I can tell theres going to be more follow up but compared to Jack and ambers first hookups, this felt like amber lite. I felt like I was 3/4 of the way through the chapter before i even really got to the brief meat and potatoes of it. Hoping if there’s an edit we get more meat to the nasty details of amber being a slut for that jackass. Curious to see how she tells bill what happened! Other than that I don’t know where the Stacy thing is going, and it’s an interesting side plot but I hope things don’t stray too far from what this is really about which is a slutty loving wife! Lastly, god I hope the anniversary is ch 11!!!!!
Wdude2069
2022-10-02 14:32:38 +0000 UTCLol
Wdude2069
2022-10-02 05:41:14 +0000 UTCReally like this idea, MLJ!
SE
2022-10-02 01:32:15 +0000 UTCI really liked what you did with the chapter, but really hated that David got anything and really hope that Jack accidentally bumps into David as he is getting into his car, I don't know, and maybe loosens a couple of David's teeth. Or maybe Jack goes ballistic over David to Amber and at outwardly Amber acts tells Jack that he doesn't own her or control what she does. However, then, David shows back up at her and Bill's house (maybe after the anniversary?) -- instead of being at work -- and tries something a little on the rough side and tears her top. Amber, a little scared of this ballsy little twat and not being able to figure out any other way out of this, texts Jack and then Jack shows up and beats the shit out of him. They take pictures of Amber upset and crying and get David to confess to his attempted assault on video and tell him to get the fuck out and then Jack ends the conversation by telling David that he should quit his job immediately and move elsewhere. David becomes indignant but Jack says that otherwise he goes to jail and Jack has friends in jail that would be glad to make David their little sex toy. David hurries out but can be heard on his phone calling his uncle and telling him he quits because he has a better offer in another city. David drives off, Amber hugs Jack, crying, and thanks him and asks if he really has friends in jail and he admits that he does not but "shit for brains didn't know that." Jack is about to leave when she tells him he doesn't have to and that she wants to show him her appreciation. Take it or not, just an idea that would completely finish off David and make people like me feel better about his lazy, lying, manipulative ass. There is no one worse than someone who thinks they are a master of manipulation when all they are are bullies.
MLJ
2022-10-01 23:11:24 +0000 UTCPart 11 next week?
John Lewis
2022-10-01 10:15:12 +0000 UTCBravo
Hugh Jassole
2022-10-01 09:44:56 +0000 UTCI also loved the choice of not having Stacey join them in yet, the payoff of that will be so much better and realistic. If she joins in a video recording in the future that’d be the hottest thing ever.
ojapa O
2022-10-01 07:45:27 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, I love the beginning where the story was sort of about pleasing Bill and seeing the story through his lens, but centering this part of the story around Amber is really hot and a great idea since it keeps it more diverse. I do hope that we get to have more chapter like the first couple specially when the anniversary comes. The different perspectives, from Bill, from Jack, from the camera and from Amber are what makes this story so unique and special in my opinion. With that being said all this pre aniversary stuff is amazing and I would not mind if it dragged on a bit longer if the story is still developing Great stuff!
ojapa O
2022-10-01 03:45:44 +0000 UTCI love it!
robert
2022-10-01 03:08:59 +0000 UTC
