PROGRESS UPDATE (6/11)
Added 2024-11-06 17:06:33 +0000 UTCHello! Everything’s progressing smoothly! I’ve started writing Chapter 6 and have been editing Chapter 5. What I’ve done so far:
Chapter 5: Lord of Fire
Added a final conversation with the king.
Made slight changes to the talk between Freya and MC about Ernald.
Added a scene between Alvena and Matteo.
Added a Tameran POV scene.
These changes are now included in the demo.
Chapter 6: Coronation Day
Added a scene with Atheris.
Added a scene with Jarean.
Added a scene with Xavier.
Added a scene with Maevra.
I’ll still be going through Chapter 5 to see if any more adjustments or new scenes are needed.
I can't tell the release date for the next chapter as I’m taking my time with it. I don't want to rush anything. I’ll still be posting updates, sneak peeks, and teasers as I continue writing. :)
Thanks a lot for the support <3
Comments
Okay just making sure 👍
J
2024-12-06 20:36:50 +0000 UTCChapter 5 is already published publicly, so there’s no patreon demo now until I upload Chapter 6. It’s coming soon :)
Nutella Queen
2024-12-06 20:33:19 +0000 UTCDoes the patreon demo still work right here, I’m not sure it’s just on my end or not.
J
2024-12-06 20:31:09 +0000 UTCWe can romance pirate 😆
Jinx
2024-11-16 23:31:37 +0000 UTCYou've improved the main story a lot too, adds some much needed depth to the characters. This was one of my favourite cog novels before but now I love it even more! 😂
Jinx
2024-11-08 12:46:20 +0000 UTCmost likely in chapter 6, but can’t promise as i tend to write and delete a lot lol
Nutella Queen
2024-11-08 10:03:43 +0000 UTCI looooove the additional lore on witches and omens, specially enjoyed the mention of the dead murder of ravens.
Jinx
2024-11-08 08:14:09 +0000 UTCI’m so excited! I loved the first version, and love this version even more! Any idea on when we will we get to meet Lena?
Scary Bear
2024-11-07 15:36:47 +0000 UTCLike that Mc is going to be Queen or king and why is my female Mc saying she be king or princess
Ernest J
2024-11-07 06:23:52 +0000 UTCoh, its supposed to be green! i’ll fix it now.
Nutella Queen
2024-11-06 20:38:09 +0000 UTCMay i ask, could you please add more descriptions of the clothing and the physical descriptions of the major characters? The most we get for a physical description is for Charles, and saying Isabelle's hair is curly and Matteo's is wavy. Also, why is Atheris’s eyes dark brown now?
Bessie Burnet
2024-11-06 20:36:07 +0000 UTCnot yet, but there’s a brief pov and introduction of him at the end of chapter 5
Nutella Queen
2024-11-06 17:52:19 +0000 UTCOh do we get to meet them now? I don't remember meeting them when I played yesterday
Hannah meaker
2024-11-06 17:43:05 +0000 UTCpirate ro :)
Nutella Queen
2024-11-06 17:34:09 +0000 UTCthank you! glad you enjoyed it <3
Nutella Queen
2024-11-06 17:33:59 +0000 UTCWho is tameran again
Hannah meaker
2024-11-06 17:33:17 +0000 UTCI liked the first book but I have to say your done a even better job this time around to your really talented
Habibullah
2024-11-06 17:30:24 +0000 UTCi'm so glad you enjoyed it! thanks for informing me about the bug! :)
Nutella Queen
2024-11-06 17:26:50 +0000 UTCI can’t tell you how happy I am you’re back! And omg THE STORY IS SO GOOD! You’ve really outdone yourself with these changes to the game and the storyline. If I thought it was a good game already, now it feels even better! Thank you so much! Also, thank you for updating, I finished this morning the demo before these changes so it’s another excuse to play it yet again 🙂↕️😌 I absolutely love the Clara scenes and what we’ve seen of Lena (I’m still in love with both 🥰) overall, everything feels more rich, fleshed out and very well paced, so kudos for that! I saw a coding error in the morning, though I’m not sure if it’s been notified before: in chapter 5 when we’re at the king’s chambers, I couldn’t pick the choice of “send for me when you remember”, a message appeared saying a value had to be 7 and instead it was 8 (as far as I can remember, I didn’t screenshot it) but I hope that helps! Once again, thank you for updating us!
Kastan
2024-11-06 17:21:28 +0000 UTCGreat news
Jason Burns
2024-11-06 17:16:15 +0000 UTCI'll waiting for any news! 😊
Beata Juliette
2024-11-06 17:10:06 +0000 UTC
