Some update notes.
Added 2019-11-11 01:46:25 +0000 UTCI've gone back and completely re-edited Volume 1, again. (Spent 7 hours on this today, just submitted it to Amazon for review)
I removed several instances of repetition, including my overeager usage of the phrase "His eyes flashed" as well as "nodding" at the ends of conversation. Other instances were places where I explained something, and then re-explained it a few chapters later pointlessly.I also corrected typos.
As a result of this, I'm also considering re-doing or, at least, re-hiring my voice-actor guy to heavily re-edit my Audiobook. ($$$, sigh)
Alas, if only I made these changes when I hired him in the first place. Foolish Wiz.
Comments
You can always leave a comment if you see a glaring typo or mistake :) I'll be sure to fix it! And I will definitely review all of these chapters after I get Volume 3 finished.
Wiz
2019-12-08 01:23:52 +0000 UTCYou might want to redo these chapters too. At least have a proof reader go over them. Got some missing words, inconsistencies and other errors. I would help out but unfortunately this platform doesn't allow editing and I'm tired of doing it for free through Kindle with too many other authors as is.
Timothy E O'Neal
2019-12-08 00:18:28 +0000 UTCAlso, Sophia was said to be from UK but she also won an American Gymnastics contest. So I'm quite unsure if she's english or american. I noticed these two points on my second read, but I didn't think you could change it so I decided against saying anything.
Magnus Steffen Nørregaard
2019-11-11 04:35:25 +0000 UTCDid you also change Shins "Expand/Magic Swell ability"? I've noticed that the first few times it was mentioned it was called "Magic Swell", but later on it was changed to "Expand".
Magnus Steffen Nørregaard
2019-11-11 04:33:51 +0000 UTCI'm currently reading the audiobook. The voice guy is awesome. At first I was peeved that the accent was a little British and not american but he grew on me and made me love me in the first 10 minutes
ruben flores
2019-11-11 02:48:31 +0000 UTCYou're #1 & #2 on kindle in the scifi and fantasy gaming section !
2019-11-11 02:28:52 +0000 UTCsorry what I meant to say, is shame on you. I thought it was another chapter. got all excited 😉
Jon Lomax
2019-11-11 02:05:20 +0000 UTCone question I have, is it worth the time and effort for you. I love the first book, it why I joined your patreon. not saying you shouldn't do it, but will it make more people read your books or would you be better of releasing some of your other stuff...
Jon Lomax
2019-11-11 02:03:05 +0000 UTCDedication isnt a bad thing Wiz, just know your work isnt going unappreciated <3
Zachary Laydon
2019-11-11 01:54:20 +0000 UTC
