Part 4 (Rewrite Filler Complete)

PART FOUR

PAGE ONE

Panel One: * At The Doctor's Office* The Doctor is sitting behind his desk and typing away at his laptop and there’s a knock on the door.

Doctor: “Come in.”


Panel Two: Agent 069 enters the office and is carrying a tablet.

Agent 069: “Sir, you need to see this I gathered some intel on the new subjects.”

Doctor: “Ah yes, I spoke to the wife not too long ago. What do you have to report?”


Panel Three: Agent 069 hands The Doctor the tablet.

Agent 069: “I don’t know if this is bad or not sir, but the female subject was eating heavily yesterday morning.”

Doctor: “Of course she is, she’s pregnant, why would she not eat more?”

Agent 069: “No sir you misunderstand me…I mean that she was eating as if it was her last meal. I got a video of her downing a gallon of milk.”


Panel Four: The Doctor is holding the tablet and he has his hand on his forehead in frustration/

Doctor: “Besides the milk, what else was she eating?”

Agent 069: “Enough food to feed five people.”

Doctor: “Where you able to get a visual if her stomach shrank back down afterwards?”

Agent 069: “Yes sir, if you scroll you’ll see the difference. While she did gain she was eating popcorn hours later when the husband came home. Her stomach had gone down quite a bit.”



Panel Five: The Doctor has his hands balled in frustration.

Doctor: “Fuck! FUCK! I was sure of the formula this time, there’s no way this is happening again my calculations were perfect.”

Panel Six: A split cut back to Becky at home vacuuming the carpet in the living room and Jamal is now cumming on the woman's face and her belly is bloated.

Doctor Speech Bubble: “Keep an eye out on anything suspicious with the female subject, she might be dangerous. And let’s make sure nothing out of the ordinary is happening with the male subject as well. Keep a close eye on them.”


PAGE TWO

Panel One: Jamal is laying on the floor exhausted with his dick still out and his shorts around his ankles. The woman is struggling to stand, her face is still messy and it’s all over her clothes.

Woman: “Well that was a bit more than I expected.”

Jamal: “Yeah…*pant*...sorry about that.”

Woman: “How long have you been holding that back? I didn’t even know it was possible to cum like that.”

Panel Two: The woman is now standing and is holding her bloated belly.

Woman: “Me and my girlfriends were going to go out to eat but I don’t think I will be hungry. Seriously how did you cum that much? I’m a fucking mess!”

Jamal: “I wish I knew until recently I’ve been blowing loads like that. The womens showers are down the hall and on the right.”

Woman: “Thanks. I think I will get going. See you soon handomsome.”

Panel Three: Jamal is now standing hunched over his desk, he looks exhasuted and is sweating.

Jamal: “That was crazy. I’m so thirsty. My goodness I thought after that last load I blew it would calm down a bit but it’s just as insane as it was before.”

Panel Four: Jamal is holding the past due bill in his hand with a smirk on his face.

Jamal: “Well at least I don’t have to worry about you anymore.”


Panel Five: Jamal has pulled up his pants and he looks tired as he’s walking out of his office.

Jamal: “Man I feel so drained, I need a nap but we’ve got hours before I can even think about closing. I’ve got to get out there and help Dan.”


Panel Six: Dan is next to the treadmill while an obese man walks on it, he’s sweating heavily but is smiling and working hard as Dan is coaching him.

Dan: “Brian my guy! Look at you, I told you, man. You’re a beast! Don’t let anyone else tell you otherwise. You were down how much again?”

Man: “Twenty pounds, it’s not much.”

Dan: “Twenty freaking pounds! And this guy says it’s not much. I can’t believe this guy..”


PAGE THREE

Panel One: Dan catches a glimpse of Jamal chugging a bottle of water behind the front desk.”

Dan: “Hey Brian keep at it I will be right back buddy.”


Panel Two: Jamal now has an empty bottle in one hand is chugging another one as Dan comes behind the counter with him.

Dan: “Boss, you okay? No offense but you look terrible. Did you have to fight that lady or something?”


Panel Three: Jamal is looking at Dan with a tired expression as he’s opening another bottle.

Jamal: “Yeah something like that.”

Dan: “That was nuts, that lady was losing it over you. It was like you hypnotized her or something, she was coming at you like a magnet. Where did she go by the way? Did you get rid of her or something?”


Panel Four: Jamal has an annoyed expression on his face. Dan has an arched eyebrow.

Jamal: “I handled it, Dan, that’s all you need to know.”

Dan: “You handled it. Right. Say… how’s the misses doing?”

Jamal: “Good. What makes you ask?”


Panel Five: Dan is now tapping his fingers on the desk as he looks at Jamal.

Dan: “No reason. Is the pregnancy going well? She’s what, a month or two in? It must be exciting.”

Jamal: “How did you know she was pregnant?”


Panel Six: Dan looks confused at Jamal.

Dan: “Seriously? Are you okay? I really mean that. For the past few weeks, you’ve been like a zombie. One minute you’re back and then the next you were spaced out. I know because you kept saying, I can’t believe we're having a baby. So far you seem to be back to normal but you’re still acting weird.”

Jamal: “Yeah sorry. I guess it’s just stress. She’s good, thanks for asking.”

PAGE FOUR

Panel One: Dan and Jamal both look as the woman Jamal got a blow job from is leaving. Her hair is wet from the shower, and she has a towel slung over her shoulders. She’s wearing a sports and her yoga pants are barely covering the bottom half of her bloated sloshing belly.

Woman: “Thanks for the extended session. I can’t wait to come back for more, chow!”

Panel Two: Dan has a annoyed look on his face.

Dan: “Wow. You know what boss? It’s a slow day, I’ve got this under control. Why don’t you take the rest of the day off?”

Jamal: “No it’s fine. I don’t need the day off.”

Dan: “Okay that’s fine, but I do. So I will see you tomorrow.”


Panel Three: Jamal starts chugging an energy drink and he still looks tired.

Jamal thought bubble: “Who does Dan think he is to judge me like that? He doesn’t know what he’s talking about, all of the stress I’ve been going through.”


Panel Four: Jamal is trying to coach the obese man on the treadmill but the man doesn’t look impressed and Jamal looks tired.


Panel Five: Jamal is going around the gym to coach people and isn’t able to keep up.


Panel Six: Jamal is looking at a clock.

Jamal: “It’s only been an hour and I’m still tired, how’s that possible? These energy drinks aren’t doing anything for me like they used to.”


PAGE FIVE

Panel One: Jamal is laying on the bench press and is struggling to press the weight off of his chest, a young man and a woman are helping to lift it off of him.

Panel Two: Jamal is sitting upright now, he’s panting and sweating as he talks to the man and woman who helped him.

Jamal: “Thanks you two, I guess I just don’t have the energy today. You know what? I will be right back after I use the restroom.”

Panel Three: Jamal is back in his office and is hold a pill in his hand. His eyes are very sunk in and he’s still sweating.

Jamal: “Okay just one more and I’m done with you bastards.”

Panel Four: Jamal is now standing in the doorway that leads onto his gym floor, he has his hands on his hips like a superhero, a confident and bold smile and he looks ready.

Jamal: “Alright everyone, let’s get cracking!”

Panel Five: Jamal is doing a one handed push-up with the same young guy from before. The young guy is struggling to keep up with him.

Jamal: “I promise you Aaron, with dedication and consistency you will be able to do these push-ups just like how I’m doing them.”

Young Guy: “I know, you just make it look so easy!”

Panel Six: Jamal is still doing the one handed push-up and is smiling with confidence.

Jamal Thought Bubble: “I feel amazing again! At this rate I won’t have any issues keeping up with my clients. I feel like I could run a marathon!”

PAGE SIX

Panel One: Jamal is looking at the clock on the wall.

Jamal: “Wow it’s six o’clock already and the gym is empty. I guess that will give me plenty of time to clean up and get ready to close.”

Panel Two: Jamal is spraying down some equipment with cleaner and is straight faced, the veins on his arms are showing.

Jamal Thought Bubble: “That woman today was acting crazy around me, I wonder what got into her? Actually, I wonder what got into to me? Why did I do that? In fact I can’t believe I did that, it was so hard to control myself.”

Panel Three: Jamal looks sad as he’s putting a dumbbell back on the rack.

Thought Bubble: “Dude what were you thinking? Your wife is at home carrying your baby and you do this to her? She left her job at the paper to help you with the gym and you cheat. What the fuck!?”


Panel Four: Jamal starts to think about the woman with his dick in her mouth.

Thought Bubble: “But at least she paid the advertising bill, so now I can get ads going again.”

Panel Five: Jamal is now leaning on the treadmill with the cleaning supplies in his hands.

Thought Bubble: “Dude I can’t believe you just tried to justify cheating on Becky.”

Panel Six: Jamal is looking at the noticeable bulge in his shorts of his dick and balls.

Thought Bubble: “You’re getting me into a lot of trouble.”

PAGE SEVEN

Panel One: Becky is at home folding laundy laundy in the living room with her hand on her stomach as she’s holding a shirt in her hand.

Becky: “I can’t believe it, we’re having a baby, after all of these years of trying and failing. I’m still in disbelief that you’re in there little one.”

Panel Two: She sees her reflection in the tv and is looking at her belly.

Becky: “I do look a little bit big for how far long I’m supposed to be. What if that lady was right? If I took all four of those pills I would get pregnant with twins.”

Panel Three: Becky looking at a pictures of eight week pregnant bellies on her phone and the woman is half the size of Becky.

Becky: “They’re all way smaller than I am, I look like I’m closer to twenty weeks in comparison to them. Oh boy, it looks like there might be more than one of you in there.”

Panel Four (ANIMATED): Becky is rubbing her hands all over her belly.

Becky: “No matter how many are in there your dad and I love you so much and we can’t wait to meet you.”

Panel Five: POV: Becky looks down at her belly as it starts to grumble from being hungry.

Becky: “Well however many of you are in there, you sure are making momma one hungry bear. Let’s go out and see what peaks our interest. Oh wait, your dad has the car, shoot. Well I guess we will order.”

Panel Six: Becky is on the phone

Becky: “That’s right, two large pizzas with extra pineapple and ham. Thank you.”

PAGE EIGHT

Panel One: Jamal is mopping the floor in the mens room and the viewer can see his reflection in the mirrors as he’s mopping. He still looks sad.

Jamal: “Oh man, what are you going to do dude?”

Panel Two: He catches a glimpse of himself in the mirror and sees the veins in his arms and the swelling of his biceps.

Jamal: “The crazy thing is that I can tell my body is changing, the strength I have and these gains would take years to accomplish. Maybe I need to get tested, these are like some kind of super steroids or something.”

Panel Three: Jamal is holding his soft dick in his hand.

Jamal: “And not to mention this thing like what the fuck!?”

Panel Four: Jamal is putting the cleaning supplies back in the janitors closet.

Jamal: “At the rate I’m going with these pills I wonder how strong they will make me. But I wonder what other effects they’re having on me.”

Panel Five: The Doctor is sitting in a van across the street from Pumped Up Fitness and he has an earpiece in.

Doctor: “Agent 069 are you reading me?”

Panel Six: Agent 069 is at the back of the building and is wiring a device into the gyms electrical panel.

Agent 069: “Copy. I’m installing the transmitter into the panel. That way we can get into the camera system.”

Doctor: “Good. I have a new assignment for you. I want you to have close contact with the male subject. But, I only want you to observe him, nothing physical and notate any oddities. Copy.”

Agent 069: “Doctor, you know that I take our contract seriously. I will observe and report as asked.”


PAGE NINE

Panel One: Agent 069 hears Jamal in the mens room talking to himself.

Jamal: “Heck, if I get any bigger I don’t know if Becky will be able to take me.”

Agent 069: “If he gets what?”


Panel Two: Agent 069 is peeking through the window and her eyes are wide. She sees Jamal still holding his flaccid dick. A speaker in the bathroom makes a ding noise.

Jamal: “Oh good a customer!”

Panel Three: Agent 069 has returned to the van. The doctor is still inside the back of the van and he’s typing away on his laptop. Agent 069 still looks wide eyed.

Doctor: “Good you’re back, I think I’m almost into their system, we might have to install some further surveillance devices depending on your results from your visit.”

Panel Four: The Doctor notices the expression on her face. Agent 069 has corrected her expression.

Doctor: “Is something wrong?”

Agent 069: “No, not at all. I was just thinking about something.”

Doctor: “Good. Let’s get going, we need to prepare for the visit with the female subject. And I need to get down to the lab.”

Panel Five: Jamal is walking up to the desk, his face looks happy and welcoming.

Jamal: “Welcome to Pumped Up Fitness! Where we..”

Guy: “Hey man you got a bathroom I can use?”

Jamal: “Sure do! Are you a member?”

Guy: “Naw man, I just need to pee before I head home. Can I use it?”

Panel Six: Jamal looks disappointed as he points behind him.

Jamal: “Yeah it’s in the back, through the door and then take a right.”

Guy: “Thanks dude.”

Jamal: “Yeah…no problem.”


PAGE TEN

Panel One: POV shot of the entire city.

Caption: A few hours later in the city of Tum Town

Panel Two: Three women are sitting at a outside table laughing and sipping on drinks, there’s a fourth empty chair at the table. One of the women is waving at someone in the distance.

• These are the same three women from the comic that Jamal fucks in the mens locker room.
  

Woman: “Hey girl we’re over here!”

Panel Three: All three women looked shocked when they see their friend with her bloated sloshing belly as she’s walking over to the table. Her belly is sticking out under her shirt a bit.

    It’s the same woman from the gym that Jamal got a blow job from.

Womans friend: “Hey girl you…look a bit…different.”

Woman: “Girl I know what you’re trying to say but trust me there’s a good story behind this.”

Other Woman: “You know I like a story.”

Panel Four: When the woman sits down her shirt lifts up a bit more.

Woman: “Just a heads up I won’t be able to have brunch I’m still full from an earlier…protein shake.”

Woman friend: “Um did you drink the whole tub?”

Woman: “I drank more than what should be humanly possible.”

Other Friend: “Girl what are you talking about?”

Panel Five: The woman leans in closer to her friends and they’re leaning in close as well as if she’s about to tell a secret.

Woman: “So there’s this gym called Pumped Up Fitness, it’s down on Linea Negra Lane. There’s this guy there that is magical or something.”

Other Woman: “Magical? He does card tricks or something?”

Woman: “No hear me out. He’s sexy but he like, hypnotized me or something. He didn’t force me or anything but I just couldn’t stop myself. He’s the one that did this to me.”

Other Woman: “He made you drink a tub of protein shake? Girl I’m so lost. What are you talking about?”

Panel Six: The woman is holding out her hands to show a measurement of how big Jamal's dick was as she’s talking to them.

Woman: “Like I said he like hypnotized me or something. But anyway we get into his office and I just can’t control myself. Anyway, he chokes me one literally the biggest dick I’ve ever had.”

Other Woman: “No way. Bigger than Vince?”

Woman: “He makes Vince look small. Anyway, when he came it just wouldn’t stop and I swear he was getting bigger or something.”

Other Woman: “Damn Diane, tell us more. We might have to go check this guy out.”