Spring Break Memories Ch. 3!
Added 2025-04-19 23:24:21 +0000 UTC(DISCLAIMER: All characters represented in
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Thank you. While this was a fun story, I'm always a little disappointed when only one thing happens. In this case, they go to a room and have sex, then change position and have sex. My favourite stories of yours have more incident. Sometimes those incidents are shorter encounters with multiple partners, but I love that this mini series is doing longer one-on-one stories. But I'd like them more if there was a second act more dramatic than moving from the desk to the sofa. There is a whole empty school to play in. Is the limits of Sabrina's dreams to have sex multiple times in one forbidden room? This is a girl whose first suggestion for a sexual encounter was in the middle of the football field. Surely she has more in her. She must be in line to be valedictorian. What if she gave a practice speech in the auditorium, naked, while Ryan watched? Or better yet, to an empty auditorium while Ryan takes her from behind. And what about Ryan's predilections? This is his one chance to do something anywhere, not just broom closets and locked classrooms. This is the one day when a sexual encounter in the quad or another thoroughfare is a possibility. Every remaining day in school he could pass through some crowded place, remembering the time he had a naked carnal encounter on that same spot. Now that would be a senior year memory. I hope when this is remastered for an ebook in a few years that you consider making this the epic that it could be. Wishing you all the best, as one of your fans, James.
James Appleby
2025-04-21 09:26:11 +0000 UTC
