“I got it,” I said. “If we can get them to block off the air intakes in hallway 3A, that will trigger the system to open up the door into Reservoir B in order to ventilate the system. Once th...
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Time was different between our two ships. This became abundantly clear, and the reason was simple: our ship had conscious ...
2024-08-25 01:21:52 +0000 UTC View PostHere's the deal: I have the chapters written. I just don't like them. The ending feels unearned and does not fit the storyline or the story as a whole.
Yet.
It isn't right
Antoine Stone is the Athlete.
No aspect has been chosen.
Antoine has a Plot Armor score of 26, Mettle of 7, Moxie of 4, Hustle of 5, Savvy of 3, and Grit of 7....
2024-08-14 06:56:47 +0000 UTC View Post
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I stood in the living room area of the loft next to Antoine and Kimberly. We had taken days...
2024-08-11 09:14:29 +0000 UTC View PostChapter tomorrow. It'll be a big one.
The first rescue begins. It's time to see if Riley and the gang can live up to Project Rewind's goals.
It's time to save lives.
It's time fo...
2024-08-09 21:54:09 +0000 UTC View PostThe Carousel Atlas’ section on rescues was written, or at least rewritten, by Curtis W., who was the same guy whose journal entries in the Atlas told us about Project Rewind.
He proposed a ...
2024-08-07 04:17:17 +0000 UTC View PostIt didn't take long after acquiring the Carousel Atlas to figure out that the book was made for Scholars, not puny Film Buffs.
At first glance, it did look organized.
Everything was div...
2024-08-04 03:53:36 +0000 UTC View Post"Are you sure we can't just call Sal again?" Isaac asked. I could tell there was something he was aching to say. He was afraid. Unfortunately, his fear came out in the form of insincere apathy and ...
2024-07-31 04:58:51 +0000 UTC View PostCarousel Book Five starts tomorrow. I guess you could say it's about to... take off.
See you then.
2024-07-30 02:04:26 +0000 UTC View PostKimberly looked through the tropes and then stared back up at us, hoping that we would be able to encourage her decision.
We had discussed this a long time ago, back when we had nothin...
2024-07-27 02:53:23 +0000 UTC View PostI lay still in the cornfield as I waited for my wounds to disappear.
I didn't even notice when it actually happened. My head was laying on my arm, and at some point, I noticed that the fabric...
2024-07-25 03:04:16 +0000 UTC View PostAlright, Kimberly will get her aspect.
Thanks to all readers who provided their arguments for and against. Based on your ideas, I might adjust some things in the edit.
As requested, I ...
2024-07-21 14:50:22 +0000 UTC View PostKimberly has completed a storyline after level 21. Did she perform well enough to earn her Aspect? Eye Candy Archetypes get their aspect after a "perfect" performance.
Did she do it?
Yo...
2024-07-20 15:01:22 +0000 UTC View Post"We have to leave now," I said as I ushered them to follow me.
Luckily, whatever weird ancestor-worshipping ritual the Patchers were going through was keeping them from turning to us, but I k...
2024-07-20 14:19:00 +0000 UTC View PostI could hear footsteps and Ted screaming as someone dragged him along the floor. I had a gun that Antoine had given me and enough Hustle to be able to use it.
I climbed out of the treehouse i...
2024-07-17 00:42:32 +0000 UTC View PostI stared down at the page.
The name Sheriff Thomas Patcher stared back up at me.
What happened to Sheriff Jonathan Miller? They made Tommy Patcher the sheriff—the very guy who we susp...
2024-07-13 12:13:57 +0000 UTC View PostAs we drove back to the boarding house, we discussed our plans for the future. We had suspects to question. We could see a line of attack to get to the bottom of this mystery, even if we couldn't s...
2024-07-11 19:08:52 +0000 UTC View PostI told you that I would be editing the Tutorial ending based on feedback and then tell you what changed.
The lead-up to the Silas Dyrkon monologue is largely the same. The only difference, re...
2024-07-10 22:35:09 +0000 UTC View PostDina continued to fight back tears as Benny watched his son run off into the distance.
"I'm so sorry about that, ma'am," he said. "The boy's just going through a lot right now. Not as much as...
2024-07-09 11:40:05 +0000 UTC View PostTrigger Warning: While no violence towards children is depicted, the narrative deals with distressing situations related to a missing child and childhood trauma. Reader discretion is advised.
We are officially on the Friday/Monday schedule.
In the future, I will try to make it so that storylines take around a few weeks to post instead of months. I felt like the stories didn't have...
2024-07-04 19:23:53 +0000 UTC View PostI walked through the aisles of the general store with a purpose.
I was making a mental shopping list. The shelves were stacked with a meager supply of canned goods as well as all the staples ...
2024-07-02 20:44:19 +0000 UTC View PostI met my deadline and am working on your chapter. It should launch late tonight into the early morning hours.
Thank you for your patience.
2024-07-01 23:31:22 +0000 UTC View PostI will be starting the Friday and Monday Schedule ASAP, but as I have said before, I have a manuscript due soon. I will get the next chapter in soon, hopefully tomorrow. This one should be around 5...
2024-06-22 03:02:10 +0000 UTC View PostHis aspect is Filmmaker.
Filmmaker: The Filmmaker has a comprehensive understanding of the filmmaking p...
With Book Four finished, we are now onto the next phase of the adventure.
While I prepare for Book Five, I am going to write and publish an in-between storyline that I fear I won't get anoth...
2024-06-19 21:02:50 +0000 UTC View PostIsaac got two stat tickets and three tropes, along with a few coins. His low level meant that even an… uninspired performance netted him some gains.
After obtaining them, he kept calling hi...
2024-06-17 03:41:41 +0000 UTC View PostEven as we stood there in shock at what had just happened, Carousel started to come back to life all around us.
I could hear that the Centennial Celebration, the modern one, was starting up i...
2024-06-17 03:32:20 +0000 UTC View Post