CS - Chapters 21 to 25
Added 2024-05-18 02:33:40 +0000 UTCChapter 21
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Me too. I think I still am.
A. F. Kay
2024-05-19 18:28:35 +0000 UTCThank you!!!!
A. F. Kay
2024-05-19 18:28:23 +0000 UTCTo be fair, I was very naïve when I was twelve as well 😅
Lonnie
2024-05-19 10:48:51 +0000 UTCset Lid d own and glanced at the scribes again. They still hadn’t focused on me. Down is broken
Lonnie
2024-05-19 10:18:04 +0000 UTCDA spoiled me. It did get better and I found myself excited to read on. I was surprised and saddened when I read the last line. I thought I had more to read. I hope that this is not the end of this story.
Lena M. Lucente
2024-05-19 03:36:54 +0000 UTCIf I had time to rewrite the book I would tone that down some. It is what it is though...and probably accurate for what is basically a military academy. I would expect a significant amount of people to quit.
A. F. Kay
2024-05-19 02:51:40 +0000 UTCOk, now the real exciting stuff starts. I was starting to get mad at the story for being so aggressive towards the main character who knows nothing of what's going on around and to him. Finally some king of answers/help has arrived. I was getting so frustrated by chapter 20 that I almost didn't continue. But I liked Cevins character so much, that I'm glad I continued.
Lena M. Lucente
2024-05-19 02:09:18 +0000 UTCIn my martial arts classes they said the slower you train the faster you are when you need it
Samuel Strode
2024-05-18 08:35:48 +0000 UTC
