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Chapter Seventeen (0.17.0) Update #2

The work for 0.17.0 is progressing steadily. With the change up in personal work schedule (no more telecommuting), the workload for this chapter is being broken up and done in smaller chunks and stitched together in coding. So, some scenes may be built and arranged over a couple days as the script, shooting, and coding all come together. Still, making good progress. 

With bringing Alice into the group, you now have to manage your interactions with her as well. Unlike Carol and Naomi, though, the stats you can earn with Alice are a little different. Or, at least what they mean in terms of your relationship with her.

Love: Jack already has a relationship with Alice, though it's mostly a friendship between two people who share an unconventional intertwined life. Still, you know how things change. 

Conflict: As you may have noticed, there is an uneasiness between Alice and Naomi. While they are family, Naomi feels there's a bit of competition between them. This is actually a measure of the tension between Alice and Naomi in terms of how they both interact with Jack. This stat may have as much an impact on Naomi as it does Alice. 

Nerve: On top of the usual stress caused by being in dangerous situations, this also represents Alice's struggle with her recent injuries and mental trauma. When Jack asks her about the day of the explosion on the 135 or her husband or son, she'll likely gain points in this. Much like Nerve for the girls, this isn't a bad stat, but one that changes her reactions. It may make her more prone to bouts of depression. On the flip-side, talking with her might provide the "amateur therapy" she needs.

Thanks for you interest and support,

- Kinderfeld

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Comments

I am enjoying the story and look forward to what's coming up.

JamesAH

I think you are making great progress with the change in your commute! I'm looking forward to seeing how Alice settles into the group and defines her relationship with the MC. I think that Carol may end up being the referee and even being prompted to take on a more forceful Alpha female role since she has the strongest claim on Jack. The group dynamics are going to get more interesting... I can also see some of the inevitable tension between Naomi and Alice coming into play - as I don't think Naomi is going to give up on her romantic and physical relationship with Jack, regardless of what Alice wants/thinks - new world = new relationship dynamic. This is one situation where I think that polyamory would work, if Alice can adapt and put the needs of the group in front of her need to be the center of attention (or at least competing with Naomi for attention). The new stats make sense and fit into the tightrope act that Jack will have to walk at times. This is going to be one Very interesting road trip!

Pax

Cannot wait!!!


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